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To My Mother

                                                                                       To  My Mother

She is young and strong always
She wise and clever in this land
Her crown and rule with love
Her land is full of glee and peace
She is my mother  S   She is my mother

Her heart is strong and mighty to devils
Her hands are soft and nice to her kids
Her laugh is terror to  violents and croockeds
Her smile is too gentle to all others.
She is my Mother S  She is my mother

She is pretty with three oceans  and
She is so strong with one huge mount wall
she is grat with her land space and
She is too beauty with her Sweet Kashmir
She is my mother  S  She is my mother

Her sward is too sharp to win in her battle and
Her children are too brave in all
Her  heart is the place of peace and love and
Her will is too strong to face the world
She is my mother  S  She is my mother

Sakthi S  Ravichandran
                                                                      
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jan 26, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Sakthi

A lovely theme and you did well, if you use the spell check on the Computer there will be less spelling mistakes for you to worry about, and if you use it a lot it will recognise your own words as you use it more, There are many people on this site that would give you help as required on most things, Yours Ian.T