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There is a World ~ Tink's Happy Place (Adult)
There is a world
that reveals itself
When we touch.
The stress, worries
And unkindnesses
Of reality
Melt away in the
Heat of passion
Growing between
Each fingertip’s sweep
Of flesh.
My mind concentrates
On the quickening pace
Of your breathing,
Your heart beating
And your increasing
Groans of pleasure.
I match your urgency
With my own.
Touching is replaced
With kissing,
As our bodies tangle together
With soft whispers of love.
Our fingers intertwine
Into unbreakable fists,
Only ecstasy has a
Tighter hold.
This is a place of freedom,
Reckless abandonment of all,
No more restrictions,
And simple truth of selves.
You as only you,
Me as only me
Our souls exposed
As is our flesh.
We come together.
On multiple levels
As we arrive united
To a world known
Only to us.
Written by Tink 1/25/09 3:27pm
Critiques
poewriter58
17 years 4 months ago
Deb
Tink
17 years 4 months ago
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Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
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weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
WoW!
LissaMine
17 years 3 months ago
Another nice one... great job