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Snow Dreams for You

Across the snow I whisper to you dreams 

of toboggan spray 

to caress your cheeks 

in the cool breeze of Winter's charms, 

 

of the never-ending horizon 

stretching out your toes 

on the blue sea 

and your head on a warm breast, 

 

of gulls and oyster-catchers 

rummaging among the sheets, 

 

of the grey goose that flies audibly 

above the little dog 

trying to catch a daddy-long-legs, 

 

of pastel tints ever changing in the firmament 

a passing satellite floats through 

sending my message to you, 

 

of the grey heaving sea 

below and below the swaying ammonites and anemones, 

 

of the shouts of children as they enjoy the snow 

and crash wallop into the ploughed field 

sewing music into the furrows of Spring growth, 

 

of the music of nature dawning slowly, 

majestically, modest in reality, 

no dreams of its own it just continues being itself, 

 

of a glass of wine by the blaze of the fire, 

its crackle filling the air with its comforting music, 

 

of closeness and love at Christmas, 

what more could you wish for?


— Nordic cloud, Jan 25, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

This is absolutely lovely.

This is absolutely lovely. What a delightfully vivid portrait of images and feelings you have painted with your words. I do so love your *style*, I'm quite comfortable in your warming home fires. Truly nothing is missing. ~Anna "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 4 months ago

Thank you, you with the magic name

Kaliashana, that is a poem in itself. Thank you for commenting so quickly and so warmly, yes as you can see a boundless love was meant to be in every word. He is the inspirator of the more than 100 poems of 2008. (Si fort amour, one sided I think) J'espère que mon amie ne voit pas cette......! I have enough love to go round, when i was 3 yrs. I stood up in the train with rows of seats and held out my arms stating "I love everyone in the world" and I meant it. I do not feel only British I feel like a human on the surface of the earth and do not discriminate against anyone, except those who discriminate themselves. With love from Ann of Norway
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Ink Dragon

17 years 4 months ago

Ann,

I see Anna has already commented on this one. I was going to point out her poem "It’s snowing and i’m blinded in white" to you, because of your mutual theme. She´s right, too, every word is shining with fondness and care for the special person this was written for... ~Nina
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

dearest Ann of Norway,

a snow-covered paradise. how I would have loved to hear your poem read by you, next to a warm norwegian fire, cider in hand. snowflakes dancing beyond the window, blurring the view, indistinct outside world. your Proprietress