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Time is measured at the speed of life.

I began to take the measurement
of my life.

How did I get here, wondering
where my life is? It was proportioned
like butter being sliced with a red hot
knife.

I think back  and only see flashes of
where I had my start.

I sat there reminiscing with old friends,
looking back and saying, how different
things seem today since we became
old farts.

In my youth, I could not wait to be in my
teens. In my teens, I could not wait to be
twenty-one and walk into a bar and order
my first shot.

Than came time travel at twenty-five.
I closed my eyes, and there I stood with a
wife, four kids and me thirty-five, but thank
God my wife was still hot.

Suddenly and right before my eyes, my life
went into warp speed, like in a Sci-fi movie.
Glued to the back of my seat, watching the
stars that where nothing but a blur. Next stop
Fifty-five.

Now I measure ahead, trying to slow my life
down. Taking it in increements, so as to
stretch the time I have alive.

They say that time travel is a possiblity, I say
it is, because here it was yesterday that i was
twelve, and some how I came to fifty-five in the
blink of an eye.

The past,
I travel to it every day in my reminiscing mind.
there is no stunting time. You can be sure that
this is no lie,

because time is measured at the speed of life!!


— Eduardo Cruz, Jan 24, 2009

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Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 4 months ago

Eddie

Thats the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. Like how this flowed, liked the topic. Not sure that "thank God my wife was still hot" fit in there, but bless you for putting it in. Ha ha just teasing. But it must be a guy thing. Your buddy, Patty
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Patty,

Hey she was truly hot, and yes it is a guy thing! lOL I real put it in to try and keep the AA, BB rhythm going. Does it belong, I think not. When my wife read it she smiled and that was good enough for me!! Maybe I have a chance tonight. LOL thanks bud!! Eddie
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Sweet Janice,

It was from the heart of my experience, and an undeniably fast life. thanks for stopping by to read it's always a pleasure! Love, Eddie
Rett

Rett

17 years 4 months ago

Special one here Eddie

Everything is absolutely 100% true! Same dang thing happened to me. Took forever to reach 21 and then all hell broke loose and I found myself at 57 in a flash. Time travel is not a possibility, it is an absolute fact! Enjoyed it Eddie. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Rett,

these days I'm afraid to close my eyes, I might warp right to my end! LOL thanks for stopping by and commenting "old" friend! Eddie