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Jan 23, 2009
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pick-me-up
ok, so i fed you when you asked
as soon as i walked in, opened the door
those green-gold eyes unhestitatingly
flashing their disapproval, well excusssssssssssse
me, Missy, i committed the
unpardonable sin, leaving your bowl next-to
empty,
well, you see, my darling kitty, i've been feeling
depressed lately, out-of-sorts and whacked out,
it's an affliction, lack-of-light, actually and
factually it's cold as mortal sin, the sun is
infrequent in this mistake-by-the-Lake
(did i just write that out loud?)
and though the 4-foot-long icicles were dripping
and crashing today, thigh-high snow melting; long-last,
in January thaws
the streets grimey, dingy-grey, a cold wind already blowing
another absurdly Arctic blast,
but i'm not all that bad, you see, i've thrown some catnip
for you on the black and white tiled floor, HEY
MIMI!, you always come when you're called not like some men
i know, it's quite ironic you see, i've been a woman of independent means,
never needed anyone before, and almost every fucking man I've fallen
for lately is falling for the needy little girley-girl ones,
hey girl, you're not listening to me, are you?
that catnip is bringing you to catestacy.... i see.
one of us might as well be rolling around in the height
of orgasmic delight.
as soon as i walked in, opened the door
those green-gold eyes unhestitatingly
flashing their disapproval, well excusssssssssssse
me, Missy, i committed the
unpardonable sin, leaving your bowl next-to
empty,
well, you see, my darling kitty, i've been feeling
depressed lately, out-of-sorts and whacked out,
it's an affliction, lack-of-light, actually and
factually it's cold as mortal sin, the sun is
infrequent in this mistake-by-the-Lake
(did i just write that out loud?)
and though the 4-foot-long icicles were dripping
and crashing today, thigh-high snow melting; long-last,
in January thaws
the streets grimey, dingy-grey, a cold wind already blowing
another absurdly Arctic blast,
but i'm not all that bad, you see, i've thrown some catnip
for you on the black and white tiled floor, HEY
MIMI!, you always come when you're called not like some men
i know, it's quite ironic you see, i've been a woman of independent means,
never needed anyone before, and almost every fucking man I've fallen
for lately is falling for the needy little girley-girl ones,
hey girl, you're not listening to me, are you?
that catnip is bringing you to catestacy.... i see.
one of us might as well be rolling around in the height
of orgasmic delight.
— Kailashana, Jan 23, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
LOL
poewriter58
17 years 4 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
How many ways can I say
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
I like this
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
I absolutely love this
themoonman
17 years 4 months ago
Meow...
professor
17 years 4 months ago
Yep
prayersbyPatty
17 years 4 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Hi kids….Thanks to all for
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Saftig stoff
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Eddie, I have learned to
youarehere
17 years 4 months ago
Men!