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pick-me-up

ok, so i fed you when you asked
as soon as i walked in, opened the door
those green-gold eyes unhestitatingly
flashing their disapproval, well excusssssssssssse
me, Missy, i committed the
unpardonable sin, leaving your bowl next-to
empty,
well, you see, my darling kitty, i've been feeling
depressed lately, out-of-sorts and whacked out,
it's an affliction, lack-of-light, actually and
factually it's cold as mortal sin, the sun is
infrequent in this mistake-by-the-Lake
(did i just write that out loud?)
and though the 4-foot-long icicles were dripping
and crashing today, thigh-high snow melting; long-last,
in January thaws
the streets grimey, dingy-grey, a cold wind already blowing
another absurdly Arctic blast,
but i'm not all that bad, you see, i've thrown some catnip
for you on  the black and white tiled floor, HEY
MIMI!, you always come when you're called not like some men
i know, it's quite ironic you see, i've been a woman of independent means,
never needed anyone before, and almost every fucking man I've fallen
for lately is falling for the needy little girley-girl ones,
hey girl, you're not listening to me, are you?
that catnip is bringing you to catestacy.... i see.

one of us might as well be rolling around in the height
of orgasmic delight.


— Kailashana, Jan 23, 2009

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

LOL

The last line of this poem says it all. Cats are (usually!) good at sensing when you're blue, sick, or hurt. I was stressed out and depressed a few days ago, and Jai would not leave my side for anything. I'd get up, and she'd wake up and follow me. I sit down, she's back purring in my lap. Sure is a good bad-mood buster! I see Mimi rolls around like a moron, too. Does she get this weird look in her eye, and just start ripping around the house for no apparent reason other than she's stoned?? LOL! Kitty crack! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, piss on it and walk away!"
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poewriter58

17 years 4 months ago

Anna

ong is that to be long? referring to ong January I just love this write well done Chrys
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

How many ways can I say

How many ways can I say *Meow*? If it walks like a duck... it's probably a cat. lol. ~Anna "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

I like this

Your rhythm here is really good. The imagery is very vivid, and while I think that some of the longer lines could do with being chopped up, that's just me; their length really doesn't detract. Cat lover, I see. It comes across very strong, as does that typical cat self-righteousness that I love so much in mine. Winter Blues! I am sitting in front of my bank of lights right now, soaking up the rays to head off depression as I write this! You captured it very well. Also the sense that the interaction with Mimi helps with the blues, I like that a lot. I also like the anger in the last part, that implies desire for relationship helping to overcome those blues, to me. mistake-by-the-lake - an absolute gem! The last line? Memorable - the reason I stopped, and read it several times over. Great stuff. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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Stella

17 years 4 months ago

I absolutely love this

I absolutely love this Anna! So creative and so much fun yet so much meaning dripping from those lines. I hear you - completely - and I thank you for sharing : ) ~Stella
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Meow...

purr purr oh... guess I got lost in the feeling! Richard
professor

professor

17 years 4 months ago

Yep

we call all do with some of that proverbial catnip from time to time Anna and the return of the spring. Passed over for needy girley-girls huh, an interesting conclusion and indictment of male weakness lol. Enjoyed the poem as always and let me know if you get a cat vacancy, sounds like a pampered lifestyle for moggies at your place despite the icicles outside. Keith
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 4 months ago

Anna

Sorry you are down in the dumps. I bet by now you are feeling better. Does catnip work for people? Loved my cats and Dwarf is right they do sense your moods. Mad... they will leave you alone. Sad... they come running. Glad you have a pet to share your life, and I agree about the remark about men they do not seem to have any sense at all. (Ok so I embellished) Cheer up, we love ya. Patty
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Hi kids….Thanks to all for

Hi kids.... Thanks to all for reading my twitching catail...it's snowing outside again... the January thaw lasted all of 36 hours or so.. I knew this would be a hard winter... wish I weren't right, I knew love wouldn't *last*.... wish I weren't right about some stuff.... lol. but.... whoop.....there it is!!! ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Anna,

the easy life of our pets, compared to the hard life we created around us. Can our life be as easy as a pet, I think not, they (pets) stick to the basic needs, and we human complicate our own life's by going after things we don't really need. So why not keep it basic, I think life would be easier. The problem is that I know I can't, I start out great and then I start thinking how I can make it better, when I done, I realize all I did was complicated all by thinking to much! Och! that real hurts! A fine write Anna! Thanks, Eddie
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Ink Dragon

17 years 4 months ago

Anna,

I can picture you talking to your cat! That means your imagery and use of language are highly appropriate. As for the men: They are unfathomable. I myself get along splendidly with most men in friendship, but when it comes to "love", I´m hopeless. My clumsiness at flirting isn´t helping either. Maybe I´m too forthright and outspoken for most men? Maybe that´s why they fall for "needy little girley-girl ones" instead? I can see where you might have a similar problem, as your personality is huge. Best wishes, ~Nina
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Eddie, I have learned to

Eddie, I have learned to make my life a-sort-of-pet, I keep him/her/it on a short leash. ;-) Nina, Men! I get *them*, they're a huge part of me, and by no means my better half. lol Ann, we all love juicy *tidbits*, eh? Purrrrrrrrrrrrr. ~A "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
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youarehere

17 years 4 months ago

Men!

I have never been able to decide which is more attractive, a woman longing for a worthy man or a woman blissfully happy with her man. Fortunatley, we men don't have to decide, because you women can express both simultaneously. And you have done so beautifully here. There is a feline aspect to the feminine heart and soul. Ah, the synchronicity of naming your wonderful cat, "Me-Me." And, as you know, I love those crocodile deathroll seasonal affective disorder blues: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pb6gMrQU9hM -Michael