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Jan 23, 2009
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Finale Me
-Finale Me-
what bucket must I carry?
to properly contain
all those caring
for my soul?
a soul I am assured
is nothing more
than metaphor
this practice
of asking me
what I believe
only to seek
a strategy of approach
to poke holes
In what others subscribe to
or choose not to devote to
is rather contrived
hold on a minute
does that negate my eternity?
Indeed!
in the Here and Now
I am ready to die
when that moment comes
rest assured I accept Nothing
but DMT
will show me otherwise
so kindly leave me die
without casting my
Final Hallucination
what bucket must I carry?
to properly contain
all those caring
for my soul?
a soul I am assured
is nothing more
than metaphor
this practice
of asking me
what I believe
only to seek
a strategy of approach
to poke holes
In what others subscribe to
or choose not to devote to
is rather contrived
hold on a minute
does that negate my eternity?
Indeed!
in the Here and Now
I am ready to die
when that moment comes
rest assured I accept Nothing
but DMT
will show me otherwise
so kindly leave me die
without casting my
Final Hallucination
— IKnowNoBox, Jan 23, 2009
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Critiques
themoonman
17 years 4 months ago
Unbelievable...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
David
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Ahh yes DMT
Taurus1970
17 years 4 months ago
This is absolutely great
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you Taurus
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
This is good
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you Jim
Janice Pearce
17 years 4 months ago
Finale Me
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank You Janice With your imagination..
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
David,
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you Nina
barbsdad2003
17 years 4 months ago
You've here ...
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank You Chuck
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Wow, David,
Quillsvein1
17 years 4 months ago
here
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
Thank You Quills
infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
David
Janice Pearce
17 years 4 months ago
Finale Me
VAMPIREBLONDE
17 years 4 months ago
Another thought provokeing
IKnowNoBox
16 years 2 months ago
What gets me personally..
IKnowNoBox
16 years 2 months ago
Religion is spectlation
IKnowNoBox
16 years 2 months ago
So do you expand that respect,