A Gasping Cycle

this is a great piece, really good form. it's not necessarily easy to read but definately worth the effort! and I think I found what you have put there for us but I won't put it in this comment so as not to spoil it for others... excellent line! your Proprietress

I, too, think I´ve picked up on your circular logic here. It´s a great write, no matter how I read it. I´ve experimented with some forms, too, I often do a "mirror" piece when I´m penning down my first drafts. Sometimes, both sides will be in the final draft, sometimes one will be left out, or I might find that I´ve really been working on two poems... Yours, Ink Dragon

Shadow teller Yes this form is different to me but it still drew me in. I like the rhythm and rhyme the content too go for it my friend Electric blue