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WISE COUNSEL

WISE COUNSEL   When in dilemma, you seek counsel From your peers, my friend You hear them say all sorts of things I will not agree, if I were you No one tries that with me Real pepper, is what I will show In return, you pull down the roof And drag naked fire to light the sea   When you seek a worthy counsel From old men or women You hear them tell their stories When men were men, and women Won by those who deserved them They tell you tales of daring exploits Then leave you to make your mind From the secret keys they embedded   Not all young ones ask you to kill Some warn of danger in the wrong Not all the elders talk in parables Some say things and mock their ages When you need the counsel of the wise Pay attention to the old and young Then take an expedition into the self Heed the caution of the still small voice


 
— t. reflexion, Jan 21, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

D.

Thanks a lot. I needed to change the profile picture to something abstract, so painted the different waves of light and sound in my head. Best wishes. T.
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easylife_2

17 years 4 months ago

This is Goos Sir

Reminds me of a Yoruba maxim "Omode gbon,Agba gbon la fi da Ile ife" i.e It is the wisdom of the old and young with which Ile ife was founded.Very good write sir.