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Bird of the Sun



She rises again...

This phoenix,
With flaming wings spreading wide.
Gold and crimson,
Within combusting light.

Song alluring and sweet,
Purfied in a voice of flames,
Scarlet claws of fiery coals,
Capable of piercing, cauterizing,
Yet this flaming creature,
Is gentle to all living things.

The incense of her soul emitting,
Permeating perfumed smoke,
That becomes her wreath of glory,
As she collapses from within,
Consumed by life within death,
Light shrouded within gray ashes.

With celestial power,
She awakens....

Rising from the gray shadows,
With blinding light of the morning's sun,
To drink Aurora's tears,
And sing the song of renewing fire,
In the infinite spiral of life.


— Blue_Halcyon, Jan 20, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 4 months ago

this is fine poetry.

the Phoenix is a most alluring symbol. Little known fact, she lays at least 2 egss. Survival thing. Purfied in a voice of flames, Purified in a voice of flames, Did you know? (most people who have read Harry Potter know) that the Phoenix senses good and destroys evil. Really enjoyed this poem, which I can't often say on this site, most would be rejected by Hallmark. cheers, Jess