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Unwelcomed Knowledge - A Sonnet



This shock in which I drown, a sea of lies…
These fiercely cold vicissitudes threaten me
Now blurring this strange world before my eyes,
A grim illusion I can never flee.

My fingers raw from digging for sly truths,
The world now scrubbed by my sorrowful stare
And hearing  sharpened for unspoken clues
My mind paints pictures of dreaded despair.

What sways others to divert from their course?
To turn away from Honesty’s decrees
And build a life of infinite remorse
While bringing the innocent to their knees….

Their only passage to Salvation’s road
Is repentance with forgiveness bestowed.



— Blue_Halcyon, Jan 19, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 4 months ago

Strong piece

The strength of your imagery and metaphor cannot be denied here. There is one suggested change, "Unwelcomed" to "Unwelcome" in your title. Best ~ Ronda
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

I felt

what you had been talking about last night in chat. Psychological, emotional, and with wide - eyed questions, coupled with sorrow for those whose path takes them to darkness. Introspective, and well done! Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible