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Dandelion Clock


 

I am free as I fly on my dandelion clock 

High up in the sky, spinning and rising, 

Dipping and gliding

In the thunder thermals

Of the billowy cumulus clouds

 

One would think I was on drugs

Or somehow inebriated

By some potent elixir, but no.

Just as at Art College, abandoned,

I danced and lived in the 

Moment of creation

 

No elixirs - just pure joy.

 

It is much like the painting of a picture or the throwing of a pot, the singing of a song or the smelling of a flower. That moment of creation that involves the whole of one's being, body soul and mind, all concentrating on giving the expression its innate essence, its turgor, its dream, its reality, its poetic content made visible in the stroke of the brush, the turning of the wheel, the sounding of the song and the dizzying perfumes of the flower. 

 

Only those who abandon themselves to the act, I think one can say unselfishly, swallowed up in a quickening of the very ether of the body, can give that little extra something unexplainable, unfathomable, something that when the seer is seeing, perceives "art". Ann


— Nordic cloud, Jan 19, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Ann...

a very sound description of "riding the moment" in tune with your dandelion clock... the only word that caused me to stumble a bit was "stuff" ... but after reading it a couple of times... maybe it was just me on the first read. Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 4 months ago

Stuff

Glad you could ride with me Richard. I must explain that the word stuff/stoff in Norwegian means drugs and I expect I am guilty of using it in their sense, which of course doesn't make the same sense in English. Yes that worried me too and I must do something about it if I can. I suppose I could just write drugs and leave it at that? That's what I shall do thank you. The feelings I had when writing this were just like the description, like being in love, in love with freedom of spirit and able to think of nothing distracting as i felt it. Moonman-the actual moon? Or the man in the moon? Or...? Ann
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

my dearest Ann of Norway,

in the moment of creation... it takes a great artist to experience the feeling you describe. but it takes an even greater artist to capture it so beautifully in a poem. you do not cease to impress me with your talent, Ann. your Proprietress