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Jan 19, 2009
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Dried Brown Mums
Even in death,
The freshly fallen snow
Gives the garden
The appearance of life.
The contrast of pure white
Against the dried brown mums
And their long gone flowered tops
Look alive in the night’s darkness.
They sway in the breeze of the cold
And seem to dance in moonlight.
Their rustling whispers talk to me
“Remember our vibrant colors of Fall?”
I see the Fall garden in my mind
The mix of greens, crimsons, yellows,
Oranges, blues and purples.
The aroma, a blend that tickled your nose.
Though Winter is my favorite season
I am excited for the return of Spring
And the feel of my fingers working the dirt
To create a new pallet of colors.
— Tink, Jan 19, 2009
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Critiques
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 4 months ago
Tink,
poewriter58
17 years 4 months ago
Deb
Lonnie
17 years 4 months ago
That touch of 'Pixie Dust'!
infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
Tink!
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
oh Northern hemisphere!