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Dried Brown Mums

Even in death,

The freshly fallen snow

Gives the garden

The appearance of life.

 

The contrast of pure white

Against the dried brown mums

And their long gone flowered tops

Look alive in the night’s darkness.

 

They sway in the breeze of the cold

And seem to dance in moonlight.

Their rustling whispers talk to me

“Remember our vibrant colors of Fall?”

 

I see the Fall garden in my mind

The mix of greens, crimsons, yellows,

Oranges, blues and purples.

The aroma, a blend that tickled your nose.

 

Though Winter is my favorite season

I am excited for the return of Spring

And the feel of my fingers working the dirt

To create a new pallet of colors.

— Tink, Jan 19, 2009

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Region, Country: Pennsylvania, USA

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Tink,

what lovely imagery you have set in this write. you have given life to the cold of winter. will done!! thanks, Eddie
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poewriter58

17 years 4 months ago

Deb

I can almost like winter and the snow the way you describe it lol The poem has life and it lives through your well thought out words Chrys
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Lonnie

17 years 4 months ago

That touch of 'Pixie Dust'!

Beautiful poem, Tink! It indeed makes one hunger all the more for Spring and the opportunity to re-plant the soil! Lovely imagery, radiant words! A truly fantastic effort!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

Tink!

I can't wait to own my (our) own land so I can go back to gardening! Had a thought about this line: "The aroma, a blend that tickled your nose." What do you think about: 'The aromatic blend which tickles your nose' - it kind of gets rid of that pause, so you can read straight through. Title: Anticipations? Where The F*** Are You, Spring? (kidding) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, piss on it and walk away!"
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 4 months ago

oh Northern hemisphere!

You know Sydney doesn't really have seasons, just gets warmer and cooler and almost all our trees are semi-deciduous, they never get naked. Maybe that's why we do get naked so much to compensate! teehee. A lovely poem, rich in imagery, but it doesn't move me. That is a self-crit, not a crit of the poem. It takes me there, almost. And I don't like dirt under my fingernails. Just a city boy. cheers, Jess