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Jan 19, 2009
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a room full of blood
there's a room full of blood,
i keep trying to clean...
my dress a towel,
my saliva the only water to be seen,
somewhere, a soldier looks into the eyes
of his country's sworn enemy, lays down his weapon,
tired of bloodshed and the last thing he hears
is the click,
somewhere, a hunter sees a 10-point stag,
his elusive prize,
his eyes leave the scope,
follows the gaze into the wild,
somewhere, a hungry diner looks at his overflowing
plate
and thinks of all those who are hungry today,
bows his head in a prayer of thanks, and gives what he has
to the beggar outside,
somewhere, a logger stops with chainsaw in hands,
sees the majesty of the grand oak tree,
sheds a tear before walking away
this is my body....this is my blood.
i keep trying to clean...
my dress a towel,
my saliva the only water to be seen,
somewhere, a soldier looks into the eyes
of his country's sworn enemy, lays down his weapon,
tired of bloodshed and the last thing he hears
is the click,
somewhere, a hunter sees a 10-point stag,
his elusive prize,
his eyes leave the scope,
follows the gaze into the wild,
somewhere, a hungry diner looks at his overflowing
plate
and thinks of all those who are hungry today,
bows his head in a prayer of thanks, and gives what he has
to the beggar outside,
somewhere, a logger stops with chainsaw in hands,
sees the majesty of the grand oak tree,
sheds a tear before walking away
this is my body....this is my blood.
— Kailashana, Jan 19, 2009
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Barbara Writes
17 years 4 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
LOL Barbara, imo, it was
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Eddie…*a dance with death
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Kailashana,
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
The irony, Kata, is that the
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
disturbing...
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
I write them, or more
Lonnie
17 years 4 months ago
Awesome thoughts, Kailashana!
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Mum