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Fields Of Stone

dreams fled the rise of centuries damned,
chased by evil rush of ancestry
spilling blood made hot and deep through dark
excess of savagery most vile,
cities ruined by avatars of war now lifeless
clenched in sterile brilliance squeezed from  
crimson light by smashing fist of
battle's memories long ago unleashed
on tender flesh of innocence
made ash by seething hate
carved on fields of stone

life still grips the remnants of countless
broken lives glowing ember bright
in blighted night of bombed-out towns and villages
still burning from despise of adversary
caring nothing for the rape of world by abhorrence
or the dead accusing eyes of endless victims
piled deep in bone-filled trenches
beneath hard fields of stone

yet hope fights on against this evil strife
still rife upon the souls of pitiless men
who relish the taste of hate and death
savored like honey on a lolling tongue.
the eyeless dead remind the living called to war
of duty served to cleanse the world of unrequited
slaughter by the evil of the past
so that our future can be one of peace and dignity
above these fields of stone

So when the aging veterans pass
in proud parade before us
stand upon your feet to honor them
and those that cannot march,
who fought so hard to give us peace
and keep us free
and let us be the dreams we dream,
those who lie
so quiet and so peaceful now beneath these
sacred fields of stone 

 


 


— Race_9togo, Jan 19, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Remember

Yes I remember them, as they lay there under your field, row on row, field on field, it makes me cry inside that they gave us the chance to do something in this world for the world, where the the fields of stone could be used as Rett did. To make a home, and to grow things, for the families of the world. We have failed them in our quest of greed, we have failed them, in each child that dies in battle, and each one that starves and or is uneducated, or falls sick and dies, or is just lost in this wilderness we call civilisation. We have failed those men and women, who laid the foundation for life in those fields of stone. We may have a dream, but it is the dream that worries me, it is the ability for you to believe in just a dream when the awakening becomes the reality of the present world, yours Ian.T PS:-I will post this as a blog to bring out the lost dreams of some of us. Ian
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Ian

I must disagree when you say that we have failed. Yes, the world is still filled horrors. But failure implies defeat. We are not defeated. We just have not won the war on war yet. But we will. Concerning dreams...all actions start with dreams, the idea to do something, the wish and desire to create, build, change or simply make things better. Without those dreams, yes, we will fail. So keep dreaming, and make those dreams reality, as much as you can. Thank you for your comments. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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Lonnie

17 years 4 months ago

Fantastic write, Race!

Vivid imagery, superb language use, and flawless logic are combined here to make the reader feel the many conflicting emotions that war and death bring about! I salute you, sir, and tip my hat to your talented pen!
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Lonnie

Thank you very much, I am glad that you enjoyed it so much. I value your opinion of my work a lot! Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 4 months ago

Fields Of Stone

It amazes me, how two very different poems arose from the same title in chat! I loved the different take at the end of each stanza incorporating "fields of stone", in each! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Me too Janice

I guess I'm a little dark when it comes to poetry! Lol what surprised me most of all was that the whole chat thing was an accident; I clicked "live" instead of "stream", and decided to stay. Glad I did, now! Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race