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Movement in a View
The seagulls glide past
turning over
upside-down
and backwards,
like leaves, furiously tossed about
by the icy cold North wind.
The wimple-flag contorts
wrung-out in shapes,
doing a runic dance
against the back-cloth of the pale blue sky
and the white clouds;
all the while we stay indoors
watching,
watching the drama of the weather,
warmed by the sun
unaware of the icy wind and
cosy in our Winter clothes.
The hills look unmoved by the scene
ever still in the meditational changes
of their coats
of trees and lakes,
houses and people walking,
mice and moose.
The thermometer goes through the greatest changes
shooting up in the midday sun
to heights undreamed of
in the Winter months of Norway.
Then the sun goes down,
the temperature drops,
the wind drops,
the seagulls go to rest
while all the while the mountains are still,
so still, standing as they always do
only changing so -- slowly
that in one lifetime
we notice nothing.
Critiques
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you. I was there in
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Exciting talking to someone near lake Erie
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you. I was there in
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
I don't have
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
What do I say to that?