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Movement in a View

 

 

 

 

 

 

The seagulls glide past 

turning over

upside-down 

and backwards, 

like leaves, furiously tossed about

by the icy cold North wind. 

The wimple-flag contorts 

wrung-out in shapes, 

doing a runic dance 

against the back-cloth of the pale blue sky 

and the white clouds; 

 

all the while we stay indoors 

watching, 

watching the drama of the weather, 

warmed by the sun 

unaware of the icy wind and 

cosy in our Winter clothes. 

 

The hills look unmoved by the scene 

ever still in the meditational changes 

of their coats 

of trees and lakes, 

houses and people walking, 

mice and moose.

 

The thermometer goes through the greatest changes 

shooting up in the midday sun 

to heights undreamed of 

in the Winter months of Norway. 

 

Then the sun goes down, 

the temperature drops, 

the wind drops, 

the seagulls go to rest 

while all the while the mountains are still, 

so still, standing as they always do 

only changing so -- slowly 

that in one lifetime 

we notice nothing.

 


— Nordic cloud, Jan 18, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Thank you. I was there in

Thank you. I was there in Norway, on the wings of a seagull... Beautiful passionate poem. An artist's delight. Funny thing, the Midwest in America must be much like Norway, including the seagulls of Lake Erie. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 4 months ago

Exciting talking to someone near lake Erie

How wonderful to feel I can see where you live too, Kaliashana, and I'm glad you felt the same. We my friend (39yrs) and I live with a wide view and the sky provides a canvas to both paint make poems and write about in its ever changing patterns, it is often a theme for me. It also gives me the possibility of flying - a note beside me is "Flying out on my wings to visit the lake." If only! Now I must see something of yours with good wishes from Ann. Your name too is a poem in itself.
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

I don't have

enough good words in my vocabulary to describe this. Each stanza was not only well written, but well felt, honest. I believed you, I felt like you knew exactly what you were talking about here. Also, you put such layering and detail in, am extremely impressed. Mark W. I like Cal and his dog Napalm I like Ike and his itty-bitty A-bomb everybody got one, I want mine you can order it up on Channel Nine. ~From "Doctor Jeep" by The Sisters of Mercy
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 4 months ago

What do I say to that?

I am as pleased-as-Punch with your remark, how nice to feel that one can say something that others can experience with one, that makes life worth while doesn't it? Your name Mark W- I was married to a Mark W for nine years in Britain.....