OVERWHELMED ARTICULATION

Your writing remains consistent. Words and meaning flow through this piece smoothly and flawlessly. Very impressive. I would consider removing the caps from your title and changing "Overwhelmed" to "Overwhelming." ~ Ronda

which made me feel i could say something was the "its", when your poems demand a serious respect for each word this one could be more potent as "it is" its only me having this feeling. Maybe then the "a-round" is too much and could become "round." But I am no expert. The poem makes me think of the little bit in my piece about revealing secrets, writing one's memoirs where I said :- From "Memoirs and Poetry" "One could write one’s Memoires, but then one would not be able to publish them until one was dead, or until “they” were dead; or one would have to tie two fingers together while writing, to prevent one pointing at anybody! Ann of Norway