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Starvin'

Can’t give a starvin’ girl
raw meat right away,
not when she’s been pickin’ bones.
Hungry baby bird mouth,
greedy cluck and crow,
don’t mean she’s ready.
Give it to her slow and steady—
easy does it baby morsels,
tender bitty nibbles,
a slow and sticky suck.
Girl thinks she knows—
she wants it now.
You know better.
Catch her up and give her
one mouthful at a time,
until her dog-hungry belly
and rattle-boned body
can meet that appetite—
then you can feed her craving,
and let that laid-away
trickling of your love
flood her eager mouth.
— rosemary, Jan 17, 2009

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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

squirming

at once erotic and desperate, but strangely in control of its desperation. Made me squirm in my seat, and feel dirty. Of course, being a guy I loved it, lol! Mark W. "Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of '54 have I seen so many flaming crazies." ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Rosemary!!!!!!!!!!!O

Rosemary!!!!!!!!!!! O my....the hall of memory shines and its floors are sticky wet....lol. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Rosemary

Domination, control and pleasure, yeah. Love the way you portrayed it without actually saying it. One thing, didn't like the commas in the 4th to last line, they broke the flow for me. Excellent write. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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rosemary

17 years 4 months ago

Comma

Removed the comma. Good suggestion, Jim, thank you! -Rosemary Quite contrary Now get out of my garden
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Gives new significance to a

Gives new significance to a pu pu platter, eh? Nice to see you again dabbler... where've ya been? "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 4 months ago

Starvin

Wow, without just coming right out with it, I got the meaning~ And your word choices fantastic! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Rett

Rett

17 years 4 months ago

uh, wow

Can't think of anything else to say. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."