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Jan 17, 2009
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Starvin'
Can’t give a starvin’ girl
raw meat right away,
not when she’s been pickin’ bones.
Hungry baby bird mouth,
greedy cluck and crow,
don’t mean she’s ready.
Give it to her slow and steady—
easy does it baby morsels,
tender bitty nibbles,
a slow and sticky suck.
Girl thinks she knows—
she wants it now.
You know better.
Catch her up and give her
one mouthful at a time,
until her dog-hungry belly
and rattle-boned body
can meet that appetite—
then you can feed her craving,
and let that laid-away
trickling of your love
flood her eager mouth.
raw meat right away,
not when she’s been pickin’ bones.
Hungry baby bird mouth,
greedy cluck and crow,
don’t mean she’s ready.
Give it to her slow and steady—
easy does it baby morsels,
tender bitty nibbles,
a slow and sticky suck.
Girl thinks she knows—
she wants it now.
You know better.
Catch her up and give her
one mouthful at a time,
until her dog-hungry belly
and rattle-boned body
can meet that appetite—
then you can feed her craving,
and let that laid-away
trickling of your love
flood her eager mouth.
— rosemary, Jan 17, 2009
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Critiques
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
squirming
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Rosemary!!!!!!!!!!!O
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Rosemary
rosemary
17 years 4 months ago
Comma
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
A Satisfying write Rosemary
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Gives new significance to a
Janice Pearce
17 years 4 months ago
Starvin
RSScheerer
17 years 4 months ago
Who says we have to come right out and say what we mean?
Rett
17 years 4 months ago
uh, wow