Kailashana

Jan 17, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

from the silence i form Your lips

From the silence i form Your lips,
my Darling,
nothing has come before us
to part

From the ethers i form Your spirit,
my Love,
You have never been and You
will be again

From the red rose i form Your heart
bleeding through my despair
and desire
shall we create the fire of renewal and separation?

From my breath i call You
into Being
from the ends of the earth
an ocean rises inside
gathers the wave and sky,
and You are near

— Kailashana, Jan 17, 2009

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Stella

17 years 4 months ago

I love this Kailashana,

I love this Kailashana, it's beautiful. Especially like the first and third stanza. It's a true 'creation'... ~Stella

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Glad you enjoyed…. now if

Glad you enjoyed.... now if I can only bring *him* to life. LOL! "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

I'm a fan

of sensual without getting hit over the head with fluff. You've done perfectly here, the picture you paint is one painted with emotion, charged with sexual energy, not painted with greasy lipstick like so many writings of this nature usually are. Second stanza works great, "you have never been... etc." is a fabulous line that I'm digging, one of those lines I was I could have written, and yet a line that is perfectly feminine and thus belongs only to this poem. Mark W. "Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of '54 have I seen so many flaming crazies." ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

I’m almost blushing Mark.

I'm almost blushing Mark. Almost. ;-) ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

From the silence...poem

Kaila, This is beautiful writing. It's a poem, it's a song. It's a magic spell spreading out to reach all points. Let it be so. wcw

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Now I am blushing WCW. (ok

Now I am blushing WCW. (ok almost) Thank you for hearing & seeing it. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

professor

17 years 4 months ago

To all that was, and still is, but has never been

Reminds me of John Donne, Anna... Love, all alike, no season knows, nor clime, nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of time. Beautiful and sad at the same time. Keith

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Nice to see your name and

Nice to see your name and hear your comments again. Thank you, Keith......John Donne.... yes... what (wo)man is an island? We have so little time, really...caught between crumbling, yellowing pages of history, rags of time we douse with the gasoline of what could have been, what was, what never was, what might been....perhaps even should have been....and then we set fire to what, I wonder? Meditation XVII: No man is an island "All mankind is of one author, and is one volume; when one man dies, one chapter is not torn out of the book, but translated into a better language; and every chapter must be so translated...As therefore the bell that rings to a sermon, calls not upon the preacher only, but upon the congregation to come: so this bell calls us all: but how much more me, who am brought so near the door by this sickness....No man is an island, entire of itself...any man's death diminishes me, because I am involved in mankind; and therefore never send to know for whom the bell tolls; it tolls for thee." ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

Seamstress of Words,

I am speechless. you write so much and each piece is a jewel in itself. once more, thank you, Kailashana. your Proprietress

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Though I wrote poetry in

Though I wrote poetry in different times of my life, until I had a Kundalini awakening did the poetry start flowing again.... now, my life is a poem, I am in everything and anything, intrinsically related. Thank you, my Proprietress, Many hugs, Anna "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Anna...

I am so glad to be here and witness the results of your Kundalini awakening... another beauty falling from your hands... Richard

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Ahhhhh….. Richard…. Open

Ahhhhh..... Richard.... Open mind and open heart lead to the open channel that is *I* and *you*.... ONE in universal consciousness--..... A new world is lived, nothing is ours but all-that-is IS nothing but ours... :-) ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~