A Slice of Bedroom Talk

ah, that I could have the same sense of coy at 33 that you have now! I see you're going through the "put a relevant quote before the poem" phase. It works sometimes, sometimes no. The only thing I would say in the body of the poem, and just an opinion, is perhaps instead of "said" twice you might consider putting "replied" or something along those lines, just to break it up a bit as it is a short piece. Mark W. "Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of '54 have I seen so many flaming crazies." ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate

said may have been said one or two too many times had you said it thrice, twice indeed, even much you have made the perfect cup of coffee. Mark W. I like Cal and his dog Napalm I like Ike and his itty-bitty A-bomb everybody got one, I want mine you can order it up on Channel Nine. ~From "Doctor Jeep" by The Sisters of Mercy

are good people. this piece is short but it does not lack the quality and wit that you are so known for. short but sweet, I love it :-) your Proprietress

liked this - began reading through your list - very much enjoyed everything as far as I got but smartened up and took a break at yackety-yack - sort of like bread and water between wines at a tasting - will proceed slower now - any comments will be placed on your most recent post ... our petting zoo includes a flock of wild turkeys under the feeder and a forlorn pheasant who lives under a snowy bush and wades over and stares in at us through our deck door - vp