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The pulse of incarnation

We streched ourselves to the other side of the world...
You used to put the sky across my body,
So I wouldn't turn cold while you were away.
We caught a whole universe with the embrace
Taken from a room of dreams,
In which we found both tears and harmony.
The landscape released from the chains of thought
Gazed, filled with rapture, towards
The nucleus of the flaming passion.
Shadows embodied from light and darkness,
My blood pulsated through your veins
With each drop more powerful than the last
And the stones within us learnt how to float
In a spring of happiness.
— Unlight, Jan 15, 2009

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

good

Short and sweet, just how I like 'em. "You used to put the sky across my body, So I wouldn’t turn cold while you were away." - awesome line! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"And he talks to the river of lost love and dedication And silent replies that swirl invitation Flow dark and troubled to an oily sea A grim intimation of what is to be" - Pink Floyd
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Ink Dragon

17 years 4 months ago

My favourite line

was "And the stones within us learnt how to float". This was so subtle, one might overlook it. A very tender and beautiful poem, my friend, ~Nina