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bloke
Jan 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Inevitable

Water is white

I don't drink white liquid

Under duress a dark liquor man

Vodka tests my patience

Sympathetically giving hospitals patients as i skull bottles and cases

Until we trade places
— bloke, Jan 14, 2009

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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

one of those poems

that I simultaneously can see myself writing, and yet wish that I could write. I love your reflective style, Bogardesque, a snifter and cigarette at the bar. The title's your own, but comes off to me as a tad forced and trite. But hey, if that's the only thing I can complain about I've got no reason to complain. Mark W. "Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of '54 have I seen so many flaming crazies." ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate