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At The Instant Of Infinite Time (Part II of Time's Instances)

robed with infinities of time I call
across the furthest edge of heaven wide
where ancient chant becomes a tide
of rising bliss on breathing worlds to wash away all
whispering restraint against slow limit of reality

the infinity of time on which I ride
speaks to shadowed distant gates of gold
opening to shine through darkened void
where vast and mighty wings blaze wide
as oceans spread across all universes made
anew by perfections of  eternity

my infinity of time has come:
I lift my soul to streams of purest deity
where blazing love all baseness burns away
heart melting into multitudes of One
mind made immeasurable by miracle of being
I praise the gift of life with joy of timeless litany
sung unto the Ever of Forever....

— Race_9togo, Jan 14, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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J

Jinxed

17 years 4 months ago

like part 1, the flow and

like part 1, the flow and your choice of words in this one is beautiful and mesmerizing. i enjoyed the first one more but this was really good too. you have a way of creating great imagery and painting the scenery for the reader and this poem is an examplar of that. good work, keep it up buddy.
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks Jinxed

Just one more in the series, for this. Don't know when I can get it finished, but pretty soon Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

finally, Jim,

I get to read the sequel. the landscape is not so vivid in this one but the atmosphere is. perfect! you have managed to frame the picture you had painted in part 1. thank you, I am looking forward to part 3! your Proprietress
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Proprietess

You're welcome, glad you are enjoying my efforts Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race