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goatman
Jan 16, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I AM NOT WORTH IT

Quick sanded
Standing undemanded
I'll sink for you if you just would understand it:

'I AM NOT WORTH IT'

I am worse than the earth
In its current situation
Believe in girth of its worth
From the frequent fighting nations,
Feel blood on your hands
As you free yourself from me
This is my blood
My pain
So don't wash it gratefully.

I am thankful for those
Who have printed on my head:

'I AM NOT WORTH IT'

See the real picture beside the edited version of it.

Twix your smile child as you bite your off tounge bit by bit.

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Jinxed

17 years 3 months ago

i thought the title was good

i thought the title was good as it captured the meanin of the poem well. your language use was also good as it created vivid imagery, stuck to its theme and flowed quite nicely. the pattern was interesting as it didn't have any patter to it, if you know what i mean. the poem itself was a nicel little one (although sad). the whole poem was a good read and i liked the ending too. good work.
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goatman

17 years 3 months ago

awww thanks.

means a heap. :) .................................................................................. stop rambling about how things were perfect, are perfect or will be perfect. perfect is imperfect, and imperfect is perfect.