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THE FALL OF MORI-KUNU-DING

THE FALL OF MORI-KUNU-DING Up in the air, a bird took flightOn a chase to catch its mateA reflecting image on a glass wallAnd a false space, by bird, hard to tell Going round and round in a circleWith an arrow speed it aligned it wingsThud, the beak came first, then the headWith the neck hitting the glass wall Bringing its mission to a standstill,It lost all realities and lost the chaseDown it fell unto the lowly ground,The sun burned deep its feathers cursed Gross was the mistake for fancy flightInto the tinted glass of Yundum high-riseWe all thought it was dead and goneIt laid there a while without a stir But on sighting a man approachingFlew low into the cover of safetyOf a flower bed near the buildingWhere it built up its strength A child asked, in disbelief, the rationaleWhat was in the head of a tiny birdDubbed the marabou of all birdsWhose thought is small as its size 

— t. reflexion, Jan 13, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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easylife_2

17 years 4 months ago

This is good

and very well told,as always,thank.I only had a problem with reconciling the last stanza with the rest of the poem,seems a lil lost out or perhaps it is just poor old me that cannot decipher the meaning.Also the title,perhaps you could let me into it?Would really appreciatwe that.Thank you.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

The Title...

The title is the name for this small bird in Mandinka, an ethnic group or hashly put a tribe in the Gambia. It is commonly called Marabou of the birds. An adult will understand that people walk into glass or wall, but when a child witnesses it for the first time, what you will hear is O! my God. The story in the poem attempts to explain the incident to the child mentioned in the last stanza. Thanks for the reading and for the comments. Best wishes. T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

D.

Your reading and comment is well received. Thank you. The interpretation gives depth to the piece where the bird, glass, and the collision carry some meaning beyond the surface. well done and best wishes. T.