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Jan 15, 2009
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The Bars
(Original by surrealist poet David Gascoyne)
"The Cage"
In the waking night
The forests have stopped growing
The shells are listening
The shadows in the pools turn grey
The pearls dissolve in the shadow
And I return to you
Your face is marked upon the clockface
My hands are beneath your hair
And if the time you mark sets free the birds
And if they fly away toward the forest
The hour will no longer be ours."
The Bars
In the waking night
The panes of snow are shattered
The soft keys turn in wrinkled hands
The lamplights curl back to shadow.
The hatchets of memory swing in dream
And you place quarters over my eyes.
Your face is falling from the sky
Of winter cavern, deep ornate blue.
Your hair falls in my mouth
Like moon slit ice.
If I become warm I will miss you.
Ours is a map written in scars.
The opening of the hidden drawer.
The closing of the circus.
And the tea boils.
And the gravestones smile.
And silence pulsing radar heat.
Once awake
This will break apart
And I will live in it's seams.
"The Cage"
In the waking night
The forests have stopped growing
The shells are listening
The shadows in the pools turn grey
The pearls dissolve in the shadow
And I return to you
Your face is marked upon the clockface
My hands are beneath your hair
And if the time you mark sets free the birds
And if they fly away toward the forest
The hour will no longer be ours."
The Bars
In the waking night
The panes of snow are shattered
The soft keys turn in wrinkled hands
The lamplights curl back to shadow.
The hatchets of memory swing in dream
And you place quarters over my eyes.
Your face is falling from the sky
Of winter cavern, deep ornate blue.
Your hair falls in my mouth
Like moon slit ice.
If I become warm I will miss you.
Ours is a map written in scars.
The opening of the hidden drawer.
The closing of the circus.
And the tea boils.
And the gravestones smile.
And silence pulsing radar heat.
Once awake
This will break apart
And I will live in it's seams.
Comments
infinite_dwarf
17 years 3 months ago
wow
Quillsvein1
17 years 3 months ago
thank you