Race_9togo

Jan 13, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

ROFLMAO (an acrostic)

Riotously jocular
Overwhelming and so droll
Funny more than anything this
Laughter of the soul
Marvelously humorous
Amusingly gleeful
Overboard hilarity is always such a thrill!

— Race_9togo, Jan 13, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

Critiques

Jinxed

17 years 6 months ago

your last line sums up the

your last line sums up the poem nicely, nice title too but would everyone know what it stand for? maybe you should give the full title as well. just a thought.

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks JInxed

I don't about the full title though, because it would almost be as long as the poem! Glad you enjoyed it! Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Jim

yes it is an acrostic and is well done. Nice to see an upbeat write. Chrys

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks Chrys

Yes, things do seem to get a bit heavy here sometimes! I hope I made you smile a bit with this. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

easylife_2

17 years 6 months ago

Jim

So much for hilariousness!Another one very nicely written.

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

thanks easy

Its my first acrostic! Lol I read deelilah asking Rett what ROFLMAO meant, and I thought 'why not?' Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Nice, Jim!

I'd tend to agree with you on the title, as it would be a bit much. Funny some of the stuff that gets written about! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"And he talks to the river of lost love and dedication And silent replies that swirl invitation Flow dark and troubled to an oily sea A grim intimation of what is to be" - Pink Floyd

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks Jess

Did I ever need to do something funny! Getting too heavy...but one more major heavy to finish, and I'll be OK! LOL Jim P.S. Nice pic by the by....I collect dragons! Your's is interesting...I think I see The Tower tarot trump in it But, its 3 am, so I'm probably just seeing things! "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks, Jim!

The picture is one of those felt things that you color in. (the coloring part is cardboard, all the black is felt) You get 4 markers with it, and I found them boring, so I put some pink and orange in there too with Hi-light markers. Not a bad way to spend $3 at Michael's, and $15 for a little frame for it! (Michaels is a craft supply store that I'm horribly addicted to. All my yarn and everything comes from them) After that, I just took a picture of the picture! I actually recommend it for kids, 'cause it's cool, and you can frame it afterwards - she's hanging in our living room, and I'm quite proud of her. I love all that type stuff as well, and collect little figurines and such. I wish I could draw them, as that would really make my day. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, piss on it and walk away!"

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Yay!!!

Needed some! Your smile makes me smile Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

ROFLMAO

Your acrostic, hilarious Jim! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you Janice

your laughter is my pleasure :D Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

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