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Jan 12, 2009
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Big Yellow Bus
The big yellow bus flies ‘round the corner,
Brakes’ scraping autumn’s cerulean air,
Intent on picking up the sojourner,
Young girl with velvet ribbons in her hair.
It’s the first day of school.
Plaid dress, white lace, by loving fingers sewn,
Hemmed to proper length well below the knee,
She stands pigeon-toed and shy, blonde curls blown;
Reading, writing ‘rithmetic, that’s the key.
It’s the first day of school.
Sturdy brown shoes, Daddy tied the laces;
She stares down at her feet, afraid to look
At bouncing heads, strange and grinning faces,
Each clutching to heart the critical book.
It’s the first day of school.
The big yellow bus at last comes to land;
Six years of waiting—now a little fear—
Reluctant to let go of mother’s hand,
The young girl says goodbye with smiling tear.
It’s the first day of school.
Brakes’ scraping autumn’s cerulean air,
Intent on picking up the sojourner,
Young girl with velvet ribbons in her hair.
It’s the first day of school.
Plaid dress, white lace, by loving fingers sewn,
Hemmed to proper length well below the knee,
She stands pigeon-toed and shy, blonde curls blown;
Reading, writing ‘rithmetic, that’s the key.
It’s the first day of school.
Sturdy brown shoes, Daddy tied the laces;
She stares down at her feet, afraid to look
At bouncing heads, strange and grinning faces,
Each clutching to heart the critical book.
It’s the first day of school.
The big yellow bus at last comes to land;
Six years of waiting—now a little fear—
Reluctant to let go of mother’s hand,
The young girl says goodbye with smiling tear.
It’s the first day of school.
— deelilah, Jan 12, 2009
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Janice Pearce
17 years 4 months ago
Big Yellow Bus
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Cute write
prayersbyPatty
17 years 4 months ago
Dee
deelilah
17 years 4 months ago
Dear Janice, Race, and Patty