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Beatnik Righteous Networking

It’s like this baby-
everything you do on this machine
-that’s right cat, the one you’re reading from-
becomes  slick hums of electrons
sliding through gold wiring within
the fractal shine of technology divine…

Its righteous baby
when you read or when you write
when you click that round and wingless bat
or touch that keyboard like a lover
flying fingers beating time to rock sublime
the messages you make are split apart like isotopes
in a limitless spark of nuclear expanse...

Believe it baby
those broken bits of virtuality
are ordered by that silicon heart  you’ve got
-that's right cat, the CPU-
inside the confines of your magical machine
and every one is marked and tagged,
injected into seething veins of scintillating Net…

Its true baby
Every single path that every package rides
leads from or to the place where you reside
-that's right cat, your habitat-
and some of them get to and from
through satellites that glide
and watch and wait  and hide
above our little ball of rock and mud…

check it out baby
some of that phased light
used to bounce your virtual life
across the curve of near-earth space
occasionally escapes
and spreads through space
as a stream of blazing evidence
that intelligence lives here
a pointing arrow half a century wide,
a sphere the size of stellar systems
expanding at the slamming speed of light

So think about it baby
In each eternal second that
you click that wingless bat
-that’s right cat , your mouse-
another star discovers how
we whisper and shout,
love and hate,
screw, die, and debate
compose, construct, conduct,
make war and relate…

So hang tight Baby
here it comes on seeking streams
of interstellar winds
it won’t be long before some strange mind
on a different kind of world
orbiting a distant listening star
looks up into our messages,
peers  through the Righteous Net into our homes,
figures out its not alone
and writes a different kind of poem…

Righteous baby
Righteous.

— Race_9togo, Jan 10, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Critiques

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks arrow

You got nothing to say, I know I got it right. With Great Respect Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

Electronic brain

A great portrate of the earth and all this messaging that flows, will the inteligence out there, think that the whole planet is one entity, a brain that never rests and just makes a lot of noise, could annoy some entity to much LOL. Good write and read just switch the damn machine off and get some sleep. Take care there, Yours Ian.T
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 5 months ago

Yenti

I wish I could switch off this damned machine! Thanks man, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 4 months ago

I love it, baby!

I love the poem--the fractal shine of technology divine. The computer? Can't live with it and can't live without it. My personality, split as it is, is torn between going to some outback where there's no signal, hence, no phones, electronic, games, computer, internet, etc. or, on the other hand, buying the latest, fastest, most advanced computer gimmick. A very fun read--so baby, keep those electrons spinning. Yours, Deelilah
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Yeah baby!

Very glad you enjoyed it! Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

race,

you are a beatnik right out of the village and all the way to the stars. fantastic write. The possibility of some outpost in the stars posting an extraterrestrial poem or thoughts truly appeal to me in this write. The rhythm and reasoning are excellent in this most "far out" poem babe!! thanks, Eddie "yeah, lets make contact with the great beyond!"
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Righteous, dude!

LOL thanks Ed. Saying that I'm right out of the village! LOL now THAT'S a compliment right there! I'm pleased that you enjoyed this so much. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
W

W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

beatnik networking poem

Race., You're right, you nailed this one just like the title says. Strong drive all the way through. Right, and fun... wcw
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks WC

It took me awhile, but I finally got it to the point that I dared put it out here! Respectfully, Jim. "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 4 months ago

A terrific piece of work

A terrific piece of work here! The consonance is wonderful, flowing as well as our bits of bytes into the ethernet and beyond. I can see a beatnik bouncing this off the ear drums of an audiance, or... impassioned 'spoken word'. Loved it, loved it! ~Tonya
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks Tonya

I enjoyed doing this a lot, its the kind of thing that makes me laugh! Glad you enjoyed it. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 4 months ago

Beatnik

Loved this man! And writes a different kind of poem . . . [priceless] ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Janice

:D Right on baby!!! lol glad you enjoyed it. Thank Mr Cruz for the last line; I didn't add it until I read his comment! Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race