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The Dimensions of a Moment

I was not present when it happened
but, I did notice the evidence.
Sure, the gentle breeze
was still tickling it's existence,
causing it to quiver and to dance in the morning sun;
But, it still happened.

That single leaf was once a part of a branch
from a limb off of the tree in my front yard;
yet now, having been coaxed by the breezes,
and gently urged by a gravitational pull that didn't care...
it has become a separate entity,
now, restlessly lounging on the lawn.

I was not there for that particular moment.
But, I know very well that it fell,
and life is full of such moments;
and what is definitely now,
exists entirely because of the power of a single moment,
one, that whether observed or not, still happened.

I have missed a lot of moments, in my life,
which is a shame, because each moment should be savored.
Especially the moments that were meant to be shared.
Those are the most valuable of all moments;
and when they're missed by one,
they're not always missed by the other...

and that can either add the dimension of joy,
sorrow, or even magic to the moment.
I personally have shared that magic with another,
experienced the joy of knowing a moment all alone,
and the sorrow of missing out on a moment
that was supposed to have been magical.

But, I was too busy, distracted, or otherwise engaged,
and that is very tragic.
For, a moment gone still exists by it's yield.
But, the magic that was to be shared is gone, but for forever;
and the shadows of disappointment
will forever dim the lustre of that moment, from our eyes.
— docmaverick, Jan 10, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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easylife_2

17 years 5 months ago

Nice write friend

If only we could just stop a little to smell the roses........Thank you for this one.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 5 months ago

The Dimensions of a Moment

Thank you for sharing your wisdom Doc! I enjoyed this one, it pertains to life, AND poery~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 5 months ago

You both...

....are very generous in nature, with your comments. I really don't know where this one came from, but I found myself starting to "ramble" a bit, so I tried to concentrate, and whittle it down a tad. I then, ended up with what you both read, and I must admit...in "afterglow", I believe it has even grown on myself. I really dislike my propensity to get "wordy", however...if I don't work through it, then I'll forever be trapped in the 9th hole sandtrap of mediocrity; and we can't have THAT! My warmest regards to the two of you, Thanx, #{:>{)= Docmaverick.