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Jan 08, 2009
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Naked Truth
"NAKED TRUTH"
Put on your lace sleeves
Trousers black and stride
Out of the room like that
The very scene of shame
And doubt that lace could win
Her feelings black
Silk stockinged legs
Red ribboned hair
She always stopped
You with a stare
Of dame disdain and flare
And left you there
So bare.
— Nordic cloud, Jan 08, 2009
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Critiques
yenti
17 years 4 months ago
Ann
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
You are right
yenti
17 years 4 months ago
Background
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
In the loo
youarehere
17 years 4 months ago
Drama, drama, drama!