Wet Ones

That's exactly how it is, no doubt about it. Excellent Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

definitely an erotic poem--i find it amusing the way you compare a dictionary bursting to well, ya know. very funny and crafty. GB

Heads, Yes I like the dictionary line to, but dumping onto the page you seldom do more placing or piling upon but, that is neither here nor there. Great write Poet Donnie/Sinbad Love the line sweeping out each hall. (all those nooks and crannies can get to be quite dusty dirty) P.S I just Got the sexy gap beteewn her teeth Old Lovers another image reveal by re-reading I can see you clicking that pen upon them now

all those double meanings... This is a great write, your flow is awesome, it can be chanted, well could be, only not in front of the children... ~Nina

Or do I say double meaning.This is good richard.........as always.Thanks

the third stranza is fantastic, and articualtely built.

I'd want her to buy me a new pocket dictionary. After all, she's wrecked the one I've got. Chuck

You are the master of poetic images that are fairly bursting with creativity, or something, aren't you? I'd say you really enjoy writing poetry. Loved dropping in as always. Dee

"People who write poetry may have other bad habits" and of course, "Writing should be done in private and wash your hands afterward." I think both fit well and now yours just adds to the feeling. The orgasm of the poem coming to fruition is almost, not quite, but almost as good as , well, a wet dream. Well done my friend, well done indeed. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."

Richard I will have to come back as a man next time. you have all the fun electricblue

Richard Why should you all have the fun electricblue

I was shocked... then I was confused... then I was amused... wonderful piece, skillfully written! sure was worth the long wait ;-) your Proprietress

i need a nap...;D shame shame <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

Lord, do have mercy, I have the vapors reading this well thoughtout, I need's my ice-tea and chitlins....well penned, well inspired work of written art. Dear God, we have a new prophet, and his name is in this work, the lines, "I clean up my dreamy mess..." Lord know when You wrote, 'a seed spent on the ground is useless..." this trailer hobet is like Christ, poor, yet so refined in all he does. Take a bow, you made me see God, yes, God. Now I know why I am not known as a poet, I am not like you, 'Redneck the Grest!"

you managed to combine your muse, with your poetry, with janitorial work, with an allusion to trash! Nice, real nice. A poet finds poetry in the mundane. You doubled that by making poetry out of the mundane of finding the mundane in poetry. *head is spinning* Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible