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Jan 07, 2009
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Rickover's Dream
**Inspired by the song "Rickover's Dream" by the late Michael Hedges. It's supposed to be about a tour on a nuclear sub when he was young, but I decided to make it a different dream, based on what I heard in the song. For those who have never heard the song, it's all acoustic fingerpicking style, and starts off with very light harmonics. He comes in with heavy bass on the top string, and full on strum. The rest of the song is pretty much slap harmonics, and in the middle he changes to an off key. He finishes with heavy bass again on the top string, and back to light harmonics to finish the song. **
Night falls, and I drift
moon obscured by clouds
every so often, a star peers through.
Rain softly falls
with a great flash of lightning
the ghosts of the past
stand illuminated
and vanish
into a cloud of smoke
Pieces of me are torn off
and turned purple
spiraling upwards
onwards
into the clouds
Flashing around me
thunder deafening
The ghosts return
and together we fall
with the rain.....
Night falls, and I drift
moon obscured by clouds
every so often, a star peers through.
Rain softly falls
with a great flash of lightning
the ghosts of the past
stand illuminated
and vanish
into a cloud of smoke
Pieces of me are torn off
and turned purple
spiraling upwards
onwards
into the clouds
Flashing around me
thunder deafening
The ghosts return
and together we fall
with the rain.....
— infinite_dwarf, Jan 07, 2009
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Critiques
Jinxed
17 years 5 months ago
haunting yet picturesque
poewriter58
17 years 5 months ago
jess
Quillsvein1
17 years 5 months ago
definitely
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
I love this
infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
Thanks, everyone!
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 4 months ago
Imagination is at its peak.