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Beginning and End
Part one
When there is no one else
And my tears fall silent
The wind whispers your name
I know this much is true…
Do you remember the first day we met?
Both suffered from heart ach and lament
With shinning eyes, I held your hand
All at once I began to understand
Never believed in fate or destiny
Never believed in a one and only
You turned me around…
You turned me around…
I loved you like the river could flow
I loved you like the mountains could grow
I loved you like the diamonds in the sky
I loved you like the truth in your lies
You turned me around…
You turned me around…
Part two
When there is no one else
And my tears fell like stones
The wind became a violent storm
I know this much is true…
Do you remember our last fight?
Both suffering heart ache and pain at the sight
With crying eyes you banished me out
Onto the streets with out a doubt
Never believed we would ever be done
Never believed I would be only one
You turned me around…
You turned me around…
I loved you as much as any man could
I loved you more than anybody should
I loved you like the birds in the sky
I loved you and I never wondered why
You turned me around…
You turned me around…
Critiques
poewriter58
17 years 5 months ago
heart ache(ach) fell like