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Time Poem

Time is like a serial killer
Stalking my dreams
Already aged and gray.

He never misses.  It’s only a matter of patience.
He’s never caught
Illusive as film of spirit
Or wind.

Time wears combat boots.
Bloodless armies, hard-souled
And washed unclean march

To silent drums that reckon eons.  Tap
Tap goes the beat that proves space 
The measure of man
Or heart.

Cold shadow hides the slayer
Indifferent to young hope
He lurks in bitter squall.

Winter bones grip with icy passion
And care not for yellow bud
Cool as stone
Or grave.

Time howls with windy breath
And mountains wash ashore.
His laughter is full of dust.

The hour-glass drops grains of sand
Across the dunes
Lonely grass bends
Or breaks.

Time will always have his way
My name long forgotten
Whose hand is on my shoulder?

The pendulum swings to another world.
Grandfather croons a minor song
And time is up
Or the end.
     
Alternate end: But not the end.
— deelilah, Jan 05, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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leonard daranjo

17 years 5 months ago

Deelilah - Poetry at its most sublime

Beautiful. So many great images/descriptions. Hard to pick a favourite stanza but I will settle for: The hour-glass drops grains of sand Across the dunes Lonely grass bends Or breaks Was transported to another world. Cheers ... Leonard
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Leonard

This is high praise coming from you with your many words on time. We do seem to see it differently, though, don't you think? You seem very stable in your view; I on the other hand, am being dragged (by time) kicking and screaming. Do so appreciate your comments. Yours, Deelilah
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 5 months ago

Time Poem

Dee, I especially loved the first stanza, probably because I am there~ Thanks for sharing! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Hello Janice

So nice to hear from you. Time is relentless, isn't it? But then I guess we'd never get anywhere without it. Yours, D.