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Tink

Jan 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love Lost

A tear for
A memory remembered.
A friend lost.
My heart broken.

Written by Tink 12/27/08

— Tink, Jan 05, 2009

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Region, Country: Pennsylvania, USA

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poewriter58

17 years 5 months ago

Deb

How well I know short but to the point and filled with emotion Chrys

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17 years 5 months ago

Chrys

I don't know how to respond, I am here if you need me. Glad you enjoy this shortie! Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

ID

17 years 5 months ago

Tink,

so very from the heart. There are times where a few simple words say it all. Hugs, Ink P.S. Please consider a full stop after l.3.

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17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Ink

You are right, there should be a period there. I had one in the master and didn't realize that I forgot it here. Glad you liked it. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

17 years 5 months ago

all that a short poem should be.

tiny things can make a significant difference in such a short piece, well in any poetry. Consider losing A, line 2. Then the lost friend is not one memory but a body of memory. cheers, Jess

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LissaMine

17 years 3 months ago

As my signature says....

I hold it true, whatever befall; I feel it, when I sorrow most; 'Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all. Lissa