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We Surrendered All
Do you ever reminisce?
It was late October of 68.
An autumn chill was in the air.
Party plans made by little sis and I
A friend called and asked "can I bring this new guy"?
Doesn’t know anyone, being new in town.
Would you mind if I brought him around?
In my minds eye I still can see,
you looked like Elvis to a tee.
Mischievous eyes and that oh so distracting grin!
You snuffed out the dying embers of an old flame,
one look at you, and I’d forgotten his name.
And I, with strawberry red hair
framing my face.
Curious green eyes sought you out
from across a crowded room.
Blushing furiously at the sheer
brazenness of your gaze and
boldly, I met your stare.
When introduced by our friend
you asked me to dance.
Stepping into your embrace
I fell into your eyes,
as the room quietly slipped away.
You had no car, we walked every where.
No matter the weather...rain, snow or sunshine
And as young lovers often do,
ran recklessly into the future.
We explored each other passionately
mind, body, heart and soul.
How curious to find ourselves
falling head o’er heels in love.
Never knowing so long ago
we surrendered all to love.
Critiques
poewriter58
17 years 5 months ago
Debra
Debra Bryant
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Chrys,
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
Good one....
Debra Bryant
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Jim,