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INDIGO ANGEL
The evening sky was bleeding on the cruel horizon
as the rain fell from the Indigo Angel’s eyes to the ground.
The shattered calm of dusk,
squirmed in convulsions on the terra firma
where her heart slumped in a lump
like a dead skinless rabbit,
torn out, ripped out, from under her ribs,
and splattered on the stones,
by the demon who stole her soul one black magic eon
and made her to carve his likeness into her flesh
and burn for his return,
seeing in her angel mind,
herself, unfolding her wings,
impaled on his horn,
moaning songs of saturation,
and writing hymns for his arrivals,
and dirges for their departures,
and knowing only the mystery of the moment.
That black magic eon when the merciless gods
reached their minds into the deepest,
darkest, bluest crystal,
crossed the angel with a demon,
and the damage was done.
And the angel loves the demon.
And the demon loves the angel.
And their kisses mangle lips and shatter teeth.
And their caresses skin the skin and splinter bones.
And the bloody evening sky goes black
over a sobbing Indigo Angel,
penning poems of misery
for lovers under spells,
who hang, strangling,
by a frayed sinew of hope.
Critiques
Electric Blue
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo angel
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo poem comment
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
WC
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo comment
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
How dark and beautiful this is
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo Angel's dark fate poem
Mason King
17 years 5 months ago
This is an exceptionally
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
demons, angels, elements, comment
orgami
17 years 5 months ago
where is the fire
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
hidden fire, secret drums, indigo comment
themoonman
17 years 5 months ago
W.C.
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo poem
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
WC
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Indigo legend comment
Debra Bryant
17 years 5 months ago
WC
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
angel poem comment
yenti
17 years 5 months ago
WCW
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
amazing Angel comment
Unlight
17 years 5 months ago
WCW
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
short indigo comment
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
WCW
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
wow comment on angel poem
Rett
17 years 4 months ago
Just went through it a couple of more times
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 4 months ago
immaginative and narrative
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
narrative comment on indigo poem
theladyblue
17 years 4 months ago
i am, was, and will always
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
amazing angel poem comment