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INDIGO ANGEL

The evening sky was bleeding on the cruel horizon

as the rain fell from the Indigo Angel’s eyes to the ground.

The shattered calm of dusk,

squirmed in convulsions on the terra firma

where her heart slumped in a lump

like a dead skinless rabbit,

torn out, ripped out, from under her ribs,

and splattered on the stones,

by the demon who stole her soul one black magic eon

and made her to carve his likeness into her flesh

and burn for his return,

seeing in her angel mind,

herself, unfolding her wings,

impaled on his horn,

moaning songs of saturation,

and writing hymns for his arrivals,

and dirges for their departures,

and knowing only the mystery of the moment.

That black magic eon when the merciless gods

reached their minds into the deepest,

darkest, bluest crystal,

crossed the angel with a demon,

and the damage was done.

And the angel loves the demon.

And the demon loves the angel.

And their kisses mangle lips and shatter teeth.

And their caresses skin the skin and splinter bones.

And the bloody evening sky goes black

over a sobbing Indigo Angel,

penning poems of misery

for lovers under spells,

who hang, strangling,

by a frayed sinew of hope.

 

— W.C.Wampler, Jan 05, 2009

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo angel

WC This is an amazing write. This is a powerful, moving poem from the depths of the soul. I am in awe, of the way you mix the elements and colors. This shows love, heartache, sorrow, torment and hope, In such graphic detail. I can see and feel every word. This is very descriptive. I wish I could write like this? Maybe someday. I feel the power and passion flowing, The crescendo, of the rise the fall. Ever hopeful for the call. The lovers known such Secret pleasures. The delights, Taken to the Heights. But Indigo Angel Is at the mercy, Of the demon. Indigo Angel Loves the demon. The demon loves, The Indigo Angel. The Indigo Angel Has a heart that’s true. Demon knows this, To be true. Does the demon Have a heart? Yes, the demon Does, have a heart. Demon Angel has melted, The heart and soul, Of Indigo Angel. The demon Angel’s heart Has be melted by, Indigo Angel. This is the most awesome write. I can truly say the best ever. I have read this a few times. I am drawn by the magnetic force of nature. Electric blue
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo poem comment

E.B., Your comments are as poetic as my best writes. Thank you for the positive read and remarks. wcw
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

WC

this is so touching. Your indigo angel seems like a very special lady to me. Your last word is "hope". I gather that you are waiting for her to smile again, as she seems to be crying a lot in this poem. Regards, Ink
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo comment

INK.,I wrote this in demons and angels to give it 'no-time'. It's a tragic tale, putting this broken angel in the positon of writing the poems for broken lovers everywhere. Still, she is an angel, as blue as can be, yet must keep hope. wcw
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 5 months ago

How dark and beautiful this is

It feels like a chanted history whispered beside a fire in the night. The sense of dark fate is captured well, and I love their dichotomy, the way their love-making tears at them even as they come together. Thoroughly good. Respectfully, Jim "An armed populace is the last defense against tyrannical government": Race
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo Angel's dark fate poem

Race,Thank you for your 'thoroughly good' comment. Your words "...whispered by a fire in the night" are superb. wcw
MK

Mason King

17 years 5 months ago

This is an exceptionally

This is an exceptionally subtle and well crafted piece, you speak of the amalgamation of the demon anmd angel, as an abomination when in truth I get the feeling that you really see it as a melding on elements, a yin a yang, you've expressed ambivolence and duality masterfully here. Bravo! M
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

demons, angels, elements, comment

Mason, I knew that good poets would find most of my subtleties in the 'Indigo Angel' legend. Yin yang, yes. Thank you. wcw
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orgami

17 years 5 months ago

where is the fire

can see the speaker the elder the teacher can hear the drummers drumming too in the soft dark of afternoon a sacred fire prepared tobacoo burned the story of love that exists like spirit lovers the heart that beats without flesh something new and untasted yet the mortal heart scarred and tattered like Hawkins sails when the British chased the Bahama raiders more then this Great poem W.C. I have been there
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

hidden fire, secret drums, indigo comment

ORG., I thought you would feel this one, and the dichotomy I built into every line, and between. And, that it would settle in like a memory. Thanks for giving the time.....wcw
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

W.C.

your blue lady sounds like a dream that needed to be shared with the world... written with obvious love for your crying angel of indigo poems... thanks Richard
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo poem

Richard, The entire piece is a dichotomy of hidden meanings. True stories could be inserted throughout. Maybe you know people who have felt some of these ways. It is a tragedy. Even all of the parts that seem good, are in the angel's mind, because her soul has been stolen in a trick set up by the merciless gods. Still, she is an angel, and must keep hope. So her new position as angel of misery, is to pen poems for the tragic ones. The good news is, where there's hope, there's hope. wcw
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

WC

take a peek at the "in the running for spotlight"-list, if you haven´t already done so. my earlier comment was a little too much content-related, so I would like to comment on the form this time: Definite favourites: first two lines and last six. You come round again full circle by picking up the images from the first lines once again at the end. Still, "hope" is the key word to me, not least because you chose it as your last one. You make the demon and the angel dance in circles, spellbound, and offer them a road sign pointing to a way out with this last word (I think). A really good write, Ink
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Indigo legend comment

INK., I'm parked in my truck outside a closed internet cafe, with 10% battery left, in an ice storm, yet, your comment makes my day OK. Thanks, wcw
Debra Bryant

Debra Bryant

17 years 5 months ago

WC

I really enjoyed this poem...I have been meaning to read and comment on more of the poetry that I read here at Neo. This is very good and I especially liked the last 10 lines. I have a special affection for angels. Sincerely~ Debbie
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

angel poem comment

D., thank you. I wanted to get the story across in basic principles. Demons and angels will always be demons and angels. They do what they've always done, even to each other, for us to learn from.wcw
yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

WCW

This is a wow from very deep inside to try and entwine feelings of two entities, they will not be, but souls still endevour to do so time and time again. A lovely write and brought from the understanding of deeper than deep feelings that sometimes cloud the vision or direction we travel. A great read I can only say. I am not happy with Pandora's Box as the only thing left in there was hope, and to me I see hope as a negative feeling, where a person sits down and lets the future of now stop, as they rely on something that can only be a gift of a future not through endevour. Waiting for a piece from you that will melt the Sun, as two souls collide, in the throws of joining. Yours Ian.T
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

amazing Angel comment

Ian., Your comment tells me that you may actually see what I wrote between each line. You are very perceptive. And your words on hope; as with many things, there are different aspects depending on the details of the moment. Here, you are exactly correct, and yet, as long as there is still hope, there is still hope! I value such informed comments as yours, highly. wcw
Unlight

Unlight

17 years 5 months ago

WCW

This is a really nice poem. I liked it. Sincerely, Ionut
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

short indigo comment

Unli., You write some kickin' stuff, and I'm glad you like this effort of mine.wcw
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

WCW

I read it, then read it again, then read it one more time. I now have sat here for about 10 minutes trying to figure out stunning and insightful words to explain my feeling on it. After much perusal of my cerebrum, I have come to the conclusion that the only word that comes close is WOW! Impressive write! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

wow comment on angel poem

Rett, as a consistant top dog around here, your WOW word comment carries a good share of weight in my mind. You read it and read it, and I'm sure that you see most of the double meanings, trick phrases, reversal of appearences, and set ups for laying the truth deep under the face value of the words. This is intended to read like a legend, which is meant to be studied, torn apart, anylized, and learned from. Especially by the author, who is trying to understand his own choices.Thank you for reading...wcw
Rett

Rett

17 years 4 months ago

Just went through it a couple of more times

and the subtlety and ingenuity in this still has me stunned. I have no seen one this well orchestrated in a long long time sir! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 4 months ago

immaginative and narrative

immaginative and narrative with interest kept alive though not naive for easy understanding.
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

narrative comment on indigo poem

R.M.S., I planned this to be an easy adult read, until you see the story peeking out from beyond the words. Meanwhile, easy interesting is good. Thank you, wcw
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

i am, was, and will always

i am, was, and will always be...she is so unique and so common i think...she weeps for us all and bleeds for the ones she loves...i can not begin to tell you exactly how this has touched me and i would like you to know that this ladyblue thinks it is amazing...for what it is worth you have one hell of a craft my friend! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

amazing angel poem comment

T-Lady-B., I thank you very much for your high compliment. I work hard to write, and present, well. For this piece, I was inspired to match the fine poets at Neopoet. I have confidence that it would stand up to scrutiny. Now if it would go on to pass the test of time.....wcw