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Pictures on Paper

Draped like cobwebs on window panes
Thoughts lie waiting to be born
To leap forth from silken-threaded minds
Spilled across paper tattered and torn

Etchings on a book of white
Lines to tell the theme
Words spill forth in blue and black
Memories become the scene

The telltale pen writes of love
Of things sometimes not said
And feeds the mind of the poet
A starving man offered bread

Ink blots spilling forth their muse
As papers fill with words
To fly across the fields of white
Like migrating winter birds

Fields of snow with tree-like shapes
Landscapes drawn in ink
Words speaking of things not seen
For those that cannot think

Words read aloud at night
To children tucked in beds
Of fantasies and dragon tales
Of wagons homeward led

So drink the wine of poets
Grow drunk with spirits read
Fill your hearts with wonder
From what the words have said

— Rett, Jan 03, 2009

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Rett,

This is a write many here will enjoy. My favourite stanza is the second, it flowed really smoothly. Some minor lack of flow in the last stanza, though, esp. the last line. Maybe just add a "what"? Just suggesting, Ink
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks ink

I rushed this one a bit. Normally I take lots more time to tune on. Just got in a bit of a hurry and they always suffer when I do. Made some changes that I think works if you would be so kind to re-read I would appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Rett,

definitely an improvement, you found the perfect solution for the last line, I think. Great write, Ink
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Ink

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you John

A little something different in subject matter. Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Hi Rett

It was a little different, fun for a change, though the Rosie's Cafe style is still my favorite. I liked 'thoughts lie waiting to be born'--and so they do. Yours Deelilah
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Deelilah

Yep, thoughts are always waiting to be born. Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Buuuuurp...

hic-upp.... I'll have another please.... loved this one Rett... Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

*G* been partaking of the wine I see

I'm sorry, You have reached your limit and I cannot serve you due to legal consequences. *LOL* Thanks Richard. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks janice

I think I am through, at least for a while on Spirit Woman. Can't ever tell if she might pop up again sometimes though. Glad you liked this one. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 5 months ago

Pictures on Paper

Beautifully written Rett, I think the last line fell short [for me] and this could be just me. _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 4 months ago

Drunk on poetry

The smell of ink is intoxicating to me - others may have wine, but I have poetry.  ~Abbe Yeux-verdi
 There was another quote I liked about not being drunk on wine but on poetry, didn't find it now. I enjoyed this one L Ann