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I think that it reads beautifully. So many beautiful words in this. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll

Personally I prefer some of your other poems which have a clearer meaning. Best Wishes, Robert.

Images , and more images. Excellent writing here. See you graduated It isn't important that the reader knows what you were thinking , only what it means to them and many of your words hit home and hit hard That is my criteria for whether I see a poem as excellent or average or dreadful. If I can form my own meaning and you have made me do that then it is an excellent poem , perhaps others will read something different and that too is the mark of a well written poem. Your attempt at different has worked and that is only one opinion Chrys

A very calming piece to read. enjoyed it immensely. Fleur

I was saddened within the write but it was my own... which means that it worked... I agree with Chrys!! sometimes the meaning is what a poem is all about, at other times the mystery is the alluring factor... and sometimes we just need to write it down... glad you did! Richard

Having read this poem a second time (and much more slowly) I think I now understand and like it. Is seems to be about the loss of love and how sad that can be...Sorry I didn't react properly first time round. I'm afraid I can be a little impatient as a reader sometimes, tending to prefer poems which hit me with their meaning immediately, transparently - rather than letting it gently sink in as this one does. By the way, I noticed that 'Fall' might be changed to 'Falls' in the sixth stanza, because the subject ot that verb would appear to be 'love' (stanza five) which is singular. Best Wishes, Robert.

Excellent write, very good words that bring to mind crystal clear images. Patty

I read this again, and its even better the second time. wow. Patty

I was impress with your writing style. a great truth for one's cycle is expressed. shan