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floating on your fingertips

Floating
on your fingertips
inside your cyan sea,
calling me
a Chopin melody,
play me
like an oboe
to a blind man's God,
like a cello
deftly held between your legs,
draw your bow
across my breast,

let me fly across your sky.




— Kailashana, Jan 02, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Anna...

my next poem will be " If I had those tips" lol.... just kidding... loved this musical viewing! Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 5 months ago

I’d love to hear what you

I'd love to hear what you would do *if you had those tips*. Smile. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Debra Bryant

Debra Bryant

17 years 5 months ago

kali

I loved the musicality in your poem and the images it created... Sincerely; Debbie