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A New Education

Let's agree everywhere
to simply bring a family
of a different race or religion    
into our homes on Sundays
for lunch and then a chat.

They would probably invite us back...

We might enjoy the taste
of unknown recipes...

We might have fun
and  make good friends....

The man or woman on the street
does not want war...

Let's also ask our leaders (or better,
oblige them with a law)    
to study compromise, fair play,
and how to just give in a bit
when necessary...

(Though we all know, sadly,
that at times that can't be done...) 

They could receive a doctorate,
but it would take them many years:
politicians are not  talented
in such mild ways...

The works and life of GANDHI
would NOT be an optional subject.

They would learn that negotiations
can go on, and on, and on,
and that war is only a ghastly,
desperate, ultimate resort.

Because up till now, at least,
these people have been stubborn
and obsessed with giving orders.

Once they had the bit between their teeth
they found power hard to leave,
as if they wore great Tolkien's  ring.

They were basically control-freaks.

All you had to do
to be a well-paid politician
was go to party meetings from an early age.
If you hung on in, and had a little back-up,
you would become a decision-maker.

Why not give them all
a thorough psychological test -
such as young executives might take -
before we hand them privileged jobs?

Why not demand they speak a foreign language
or perhaps even two?  Why not ask them
to travel extensively and observantly
before taking decisions which may affect
so many  countries?

My children need all that
on their long resumés
in order to even be considered
for a decent job...

Aspiring leaders
might also be required
to live for several years
with low-income families,
to improve their understanding
of economic realities....

WE should be controlling THEM
(not the other way round -
and not just at election-time...)

THIS IS JUST A PLEA FOR AN APPROPRIATE LEVEL OF EDUCATION FOR ALL POLITICAL LEADERS AND FOREIGN MINISTERS EVERYWHERE IN THE WORLD, REGARDLESS OF THEIR POLITICAL AFFILIATION.  READERS ARE INVITED TO SUGGEST ANY  SUBJECTS THEY BELIEVE MIGHT BE INCLUDED IN A NEW STUDY-PROGRAMME FOR THESE PEOPLE WHO RULE OUR DESTINIES...


— Robert Melliard, Jan 01, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Asturias, Spain

Favorite Poets: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Du Bellay, Metaphysicals, Petrarch, Dante, Baudelaire, Lorca, Becquer, Coleridge

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Robert...

sad but most politicians wouldn't know a hard day's work if it bit them on the ass... I think your ideas here would work but they will never be implemented by the powers that be... it is our strife that keeps them in power... we can change our world by changing ourselves... the idea about inviting another family to dinner is a good way to start...but time doesn't permit most of us too much lead-way... but it is an excellent start and many could be enriched in spirit by such self-less acts... and you are right... we should be controlling them but it never has been that way... all good ideas... Richard
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Many thanks

Many thanks for this interesting comment. I love you opening remark. Certain European politicians have been proposing a 65 hour working week recently, presumably in order for our businesses to compete with those in countries like China, where such hours may be considered normal (I believe trade unions are not allowed there). But I have huge doubts about whether any of our leaders would work such hours themselves, despite their high income! I agree that a lot can be done by individuals, especially when they form teams and start an N.G.O. of some kind. The only way for us to learn to accept human diversity is by getting to know and understand people with different cultural backgrounds. That can be achieved by travelling extensively, but that's an expensive, time-consuming option. The lunch invitation idea is a lot cheaper and simpler. The only problem is that one can't invite people who live in Afghanistan, for example... As for controlling our leaders, I think that requiring an exhaustive selection-process for would-be politicians could help a lot in that way. When my children apply for a reasonably well-paid job (which I'm afraid they haven't yet found) they are often interviewed several times and have to take various tests and of course they have to have a great curriculum (including good knowledge of at least one foreign language) for their application to even be considered in the first place So surely those who are going to run our countries for years and perhaps send young soldiers to their deaths in foreign wars have such huge responsibilities that the system for choosing the right candidates should be even more thorough than it is for other posts. Best Wishes, Robert.
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Formula poem

R.M.,This doesn't seem like a poem to me. It's not really poetic, even though it's a well intended write up of peace-positive ideas. Many politicians have been war veterans, and many of the ones considered to be the greatest, could never pass the deep internet invasion of privacy that they go through today. Some people say "GOOD" about that. But, apolitical people like me stay out of the way and just try to make the world I'm in touch with, a better place. (I'm not always good at that either) wcw
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Poetry and pacifism

Your comment brings up some fascinating questions, such as the definition of poetry and the limits of our involvement, as individuals, in the many problems of this world. My opinion on the former point is that the main difference between poetry and prose is that poets leave a bigger margin around their words than other writers (in the same way that a painter frames a picture) which is perhaps a way of saying to readers that they have something special (deep, intense, beautiful or whatever) to say to them and that they therefore merit a special kind of attention. When I read a piece that only leaves a small margin round the edges of a page I consider it to be prose, or at least a prose-poem, even though it may be very poetic in style or content. When one's main intention is to put across some ideas clearly, elements such as rhyme, rhythm, imagery, repetition, flow and so on (which are important in so many poems) can become secondary considerations. My only justification for laying this piece out as if it were a poem is that varying line-length, or leaving one or two lines all on their own, can sometimes give greater impact to certain ideas. Nevertheless, I have to admit that politics is such a dry, unromantic subject that it hardly lends itself to poetic treatment. As for staying out of the way and concentrating on the world you are really in touch with, well, I sympathize. Personally I have never voted because I have never come across a political party or leader whose ideas really convinced me, though I have been tempted to support environmentalists. Best Wishes and many thanks for your feedback, Robert.
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 5 months ago

I like this

I am neither on the right or left. I enjoyed this wish list of your's quite a bit, and I think it makes a great free form poem. The first few verses were really good, I like the message very much. Also... "The works and life of GANDHI would NOT be an optional subject." this is wonderful! On the whole, your poem reminded me that most politicians are stupid, rather than ignorant. Being ignorant implies that one can be cured through education, which is, to me, why your poem is quite optimistic, and why I enjoyed it. Respectfully, Jim
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Hi Jim

Thanks for your comment. I'm very glad you liked this poem. It contains ideas I'd had in my head for many years but which I had never expressed before in writing. As for me being optimistic, I probably have the same faith as most other teachers in effective education as a long-term solution to many of the world's problems. I'm also happy to hear that you a fan of Gandhi's ideas, which I believe are vital in order to solve so many modern-day international conflicts. Best Wishes, Robert.
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Wafi

17 years 5 months ago

Robert Wow

Wow... Robert you have come up with a wonderful piece here, full of wise thoughts and guidlines that today's politicians need.I appreciate this so much specially your idea of "giving them a thorough psychological test" and suggestions for their decesion making process. I wish your ideas could be implemented. Thanks alot for sharing this wise piece of yours. Enjoyed it. Wafi
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Many thanks

Many thanks for your thoughts. When you and other obviously perceptive readers on this blog give me the thumbs-up sign for some of my rather strange ideas I begin to think they might even be right! It dawned on me recently that all the members of my family (except the dog perhaps) have a better education than many political leaders who make so much money (paid by us) and have so much power over our lives. As long as we leave the selection of our leaders purely to factors such as how good they look on T.V., how fine their oratory sounds, how much financial support they can obtain for their campaigns, how many buddies they have within their party and so on, it is perfectly possible for someone with very little education to rule us if they just make the right moves. This poem is a slight rehash of 'A Formula for Peace', and the main difference is that I have now included a comparison between the scant studies of politicians and the enormous educational effort required from my children by prospective employers (who then pay them peanuts anyway, however much they have swatted). Surely there should be some kind of minimum educational requirement before someone could even be considered as a possible candidate for such a hugely responsible job as being a President or a Foreign Minister. As for the question of whether or not my ideas could ever be implemented, I'm a great believer in the power of public opinion. If an idea is genuinely good, I believe it eventually reaches the minds of journalists, teachers and other professionals who are in a position to influence public opinion in the long term. Best wishes, Robert.
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Wafi

17 years 5 months ago

I Liked

I liked Richard's comment on it,specially his statment "we can change our world by changing ourselves" so true. Wafi
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Change

Changing ourselves is quite difficult. In my case it only seems to have happened after extensive suffering. But it is true that if we as citizens and voters could develop greater understanding of other cultures the world might improve considerably thanks to the pressure that would be put on politicians to mend their ways. Best Wishes, Robert..
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Robert,

I´ve finally caught up with this one. There´s only one word for your message: TRUE! Please consider changing l.3 "and/or". One of those would suffice there, and it would make that line a smoother read. Regards, Ink
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks for your suggestion

Many thanks for your suggestion, which I have already implemented. The 'and/or' option is in fact different in meaning from either 'and' or 'or' when used on their own, but it certainly wouldn't sound right if this poem were ever read out loud. I'm very glad you think my ideas are true. Best Wishes. Robert.