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Animal Blood

Somewhere along a gravelled path,
a man sits cross legged
watching a rooster and a cat fight.

His shoes half fallen apart
in a brown colouring,
that was once white-washed on
by children in China.

The cat claws to the roosters eyes,
and the rooster falls to the ground,
bleeding.

The cats coat shines in the sun,
and the roosters blood trickles
over the path.

In a small town,
just outside Mumbai,
a man picks up a long distance telephone call,
asking for help with their computer.

A few weeks ago,
this Indian man had been
traditionally wrapped up in robes,
quietly mourning the death of his father,
who died from cancer.

The cat pounces on to the rooster,
clawing at its skin.

A feather falls on the man watching,
still peacefully cross-legged.

Behind him,
two women on a lunch break stare in disgust,
but then walk away
and smoke menthol cigarettes.


In India,
the man tells the caller to hold,
as he searches through his manuals
for the answers.

By this time,
the roosters blood is thick on the pathway
and slowly stains into the grey,
worn pants of the watching man.

In China,
a slave-like teenager falls a sleep at 3 AM,
after making 17 childrens Nikes for the day.

He tosses around
under a thin blanket,
cold and unpurposeful,
wishing that he could fall asleep
forever.


The rooster heaves up,
tumbling around
as if it were drunk.
The man watching
still has his legs crossed,
though the roosters blood
has now well and truely stained
into his grey pants.

The Indian man answers the phone,
reading straight from the guide-book
in as good as he could English.

The Chinese teen has a dream
about a girl who he knew many years ago,
but hasn't seen since.

And the rooster tries to fly away.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 4 months ago

good to see you posting again, Liam

A haunting piece, scarily evocative. The net often evokes thoughts of babel to me. It seemed the act of a nasty vengeful god, causing misunderstanding, wars and suffering, when I first heard the story. Now I also wonder about cultural loss as the English language threatens to imperialise the world. While a rooster dies in the dust and people quietly despair. Great write. cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 4 months ago

kelsey, the day your mind turns to mush

I'll admit mine has. Glad you met Liam, he is one way cool Aussie artist, currently living in Japan. Oh and he was not meditating, I think, he was despairing. But I have to admit I have never been so despairing as to let rooster blood soak my pants, eeew, only my own blood or other humans. cheers, Jess
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goatman

17 years 4 months ago

Ta for the comments,

Actually, there's a few things that you won't pick up and less you have a think about the cat and the rooster in a more metaphoric way. Not going to explainn this though, it's your experience. Yes, he may have been meditating, or despairing, or meditating on desperation, it doesn't matter. Or, he may have been so insesitized by this god damn world that wouldn't make any difference if he saw a mans brains blown out, he would give little reaction. The thing is, this is a story about my generation, and how we take things for something else. We see photos in newspapers and think 'Oh, that's terrible.' and then maul somebodies face in a video game. We say we care and then use 4 plastics bags in a day. And to be frank, it's not our faults. All that's happened is that we've had our nerves cut out; we can't feel anymore, and we often resort to slitting our wrists or having sex at 14 with complete strangers or drinking ourselves to death so we feel a little. It's the bastards that price money over minds fault. Gasp.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 4 months ago

Reading the comments

I would love to read your poetry, but it need some spaces and breaks for me to enjoyed this obvious really good piece. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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goatman

17 years 4 months ago

Let me drop me opinion on this one.

I wholly aprove your comments, and thankfully take them in mind but. When beat poets started producing poems that weren't meant to be read, when George Orwell first produced 1984, when scientists first stated that tabacco was killing us, everyone disagreed. Common knowledge now is what was once avant-garde, so don't insult change just because it doesn't work for you. That said, I'm an ignorant little 15 year old who hate establishments and institutions, and believes that there hasn't been an avant-garde movement in poetry for over 50 darn years. I'm just an unimportant kid, brush me off and say that I make myself seem to important: I AM DUST! .................................................................................. stop rambling about how things were perfect, are perfect or will be perfect. perfect is imperfect, and imperfect is perfect.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 4 months ago

Goatman

My intent was not to insult. I read you poem this morn while my eyes are not so tired. I won't comment on your poem because your comments suggest you will only misunderstand my good intentions. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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goatman

17 years 4 months ago

Apologies

I am sorry I came off so angry yesterday. But to tell you the truth, I would rather not here people comment on how I structure my poems, and how it doesn't read well. This structure is simple and proseless because these poems are made to be read out loud, and so it makes no difference to how it looks. Also, the nature of them is quite different. Once again, apologies Barbara, as you seem to have your intentions in the right places. My full-hearted sorry. .................................................................................. stop rambling about how things were perfect, are perfect or will be perfect. perfect is imperfect, and imperfect is perfect.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 4 months ago

Goatman

Apologies accepted, I only mention it because lines run together for me as I miss some lines and read others over and over when there are not paragraph breaks for my eyes to rest and take in the meaning of the poem. There is nothing wrong with structure or how you write you poems. It is a problem all my own and not yours. Your poem was good different. I like how your images flow. Welcome to neopoet and hope you enjoyed it here. Respectfully Yours, Barbara