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Fiscal Woes (The poem)

You're damned if you do
you're damned if you don't
In one breath they say we don't save enough
and in another they tell us to spend more
It's a house of cards
delicately balanced on credit
"Play now, pay later!"
should officially be our motto.

Started in the 20's
it became all the rage
Didn't anyone learn from it?
With the wide-spread sweep of easy credit
came the destruction of our own values.
It's much easier to go out on a limb
than it is to save the money
like we used to
like we're supposed to.

And still, we've not learned
we're still buying senseless shit we don't need
Trust me, Bluetooth is not a necessity of survival!
We've not sunk low enough into crisis for people to see
when they need to start worrying about food
Shelter
Maybe then they'll understand
And maybe next time, we'll do it right....
— infinite_dwarf, Dec 30, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

So right Jess

We are going to need every penny we can save in the next few years. Good write and so true. Yes, the 20's is where it started. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett
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Quillsvein1

17 years 5 months ago

very

on point and absolutely true--this poem is particularly pertinent for the Holidays (Christmas has nothing to do with Christ at all) when we see people hurrying to fill the existential void of in their lives with sand (new mediocre films, new clothing in case they *really* don't look good, the general Obsessive Compulsive mania characteristic of consumerism). it takes a genuinely spiritual person to divorce themselves from this while still living in civilization. Great write! GB
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 5 months ago

so sincere and so

so sincere and so admonishing, it strikes the reader. very expressively stated. i am of your view by 100%
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you, fellas!

I don't know, maybe I'm just a paranoid and pessamistic bum, but I'd like to think that in the case of post-apocalyptic zombiehood, I'll be ready. I guess it's just rare for people my age to be financially educated, and ready for the future. I just hope everyone figures out the right thing to do before it's too late - and unfortunately, we're still not at the point where people are putting the necessities first. It's sad. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If we always give what we have always given, we will always get what we have always got..." - Mike R.
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JWwildcat2012

17 years 3 months ago

Your poem hits right on................

.........but I dont think that we will ever "Get it right",sweetie.This world has been always driven by the corporate,mass producing,"Super-size me"mentality.Commercials and wide eyed late night informercial hosts persuade us to do the cardinal financial sin........impulse buying.And in this difficult economy we are faced with now,you would think it would tone down.But it wont.What do you think would happen if the economy was to....and i laugh here.......improve?This is what:the people who saved while the economy was hard will just splurge it.Does the quote"Money is the root of all evil"make sense?nowadays,it seems to. Good,no nonsense entry here.I liked it. Your friend,in peace, Scott.