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Dec 30, 2008
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losing sight
like pieces from a jigsaw
spots of vision tumble down
down, down into murky depths
were sight is but a blurred reality
peering through the bubbled haze
trying to swim the maze of
emerging darkness and fear
drifting aimlessly through the floaters
and I drown in the sinister gray
as it sets in like a tidal wave
— theladyblue, Dec 30, 2008
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zarul
17 years 5 months ago
HI
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
Emarie,
Barbara Writes
17 years 5 months ago
Tink
DarkinAZ
17 years 5 months ago
Smoke some Pot...
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Emarie,
Stella
17 years 5 months ago
It’s a beautiful write
Kailashana
17 years 5 months ago
hi emarie,ladygrey? never!
theladyblue
17 years 5 months ago
hey everyone!
Barbara Writes
17 years 5 months ago
Emarie
justine
17 years 5 months ago
very nice piece..
justine
17 years 5 months ago
be strong..
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Emarie,
theladyblue
17 years 4 months ago
thanks so much yall!!! i
Electric Blue
17 years 4 months ago
Loosing Sight
Barbara Writes
17 years 4 months ago
Loosing Sight