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Spirit Woman #8 / Interlude of Sorrow (The end I think)

Spirit Woman #8

Hunger burns; the heart yearns
For freedom long denied
Yellow Bird; must be heard
Ghost Dance he has cried

Kicking Bear; shirts will share
Invincible those that wore
Magic symbols to those assembled
Made bulletproof he swore

New earth comes; buries white ones
And only Native survive
Dance the dance; take no chance
Those dead once more alive

Big Foot’s band; no longer stand
For they danced long and hard
Ghost Dancers increased; fear now released
And Agents mounted a guard

Sitting Bull; with little pull
Sees no harm in dance
When agents saw he defied law
Decided to take no chance

A fight ensued, survivors pursued
Many skirmishes followed
Later they agreed; much in need
To surrender and pride was swallowed

Old deaf man; didn’t understand
Dropped his gun in fear
Black Coyote’s gun; hurt no one
But the price paid was dear

Someone cried fire; matters were dire
And death put on a show
The old and young; no chants sung
Lay dying in the snow

_________Interlude of Sorrow__________

No more hunts
No trails to ride
Lonely Reservation
Where we reside

Spirit Woman crying silent tears
Women and children lying dead,
The numbers ever swelling,
A mother hangs her head

A baby cries at Wounded Knee

The fox, like a shadow stalking,
Trots in silent anger
Over warriors bleeding flesh.
Another day of white strangers,

Will all the peoples die?

Massacre
Should never be
Cannot hide
At Wounded Knee

Spirit Woman shaking with sorrow,
Gasping in smoke she cannot see,
Head bowed with crushing pain,
She walks the land to be.

Fading from this moment...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wounded_Knee_massacre
http://www.lastoftheindependents.com/wounded.htm
http://www.hanksville.org/daniel/lakota/Ghost_Dance.html

Good news folks. I think it is finally finished.
— Rett, Dec 29, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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orgami

17 years 5 months ago

ghosts of the plains

this is a fine write Rett sad the way things ended the buffalo perishing the people starving the last stands made of old beliefs and excuses to carry out extermination processes age old man against man read many a book on how the old civil war mercenary soldiers killed natives three hundred women and children in a bluff cave firing gatling guns at them from across the valley mutilating the bodies carrying off trophies the musuems somewhere still carry the infamous ghost dance shirts Up here in Canada we had Poundmaker out west Big Bear and Lious Reil Gabriel Dumont and others somehow we made it this far miles to go yet a great poem Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Orgami

Somehow I got caught up in this tale and went from The Trail of Tears through Custers Last Stand and then to Wounded Knee. Just thought it needed to be re-told. I'm glad you recognized what it all boils down to. I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Janice

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Hello Rett

'No more hunts No trails to ride Lonely Reservation Where we reside' This stanza is why the poem is not finished--may never be. Once I wanted to learn about Lewis and Clark, so I picked up a little historical fiction novel in the library by Will Henry (he has a couple of other pen names, but Will Henry will get the most popular and I think the most recent, which is still a while back. Just go look at the Amazon titles). He writes western adventure from a very strong Indian point of view. "From Where the Sun Now Stands" (Chief Joseph's run to Canada from Idaho (which was stopped on the border in Sioux country) "Bear Paw Horses" (aftermath of murder of Crazy Horse) These are two of my favorites. The books are not long, are fast reads, and are extremely entertaining. But the best part is the history. Let me know if you try one and how you liked it.
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Will do Deelilah

I love history and historical faction every much as I like Science Fiction/Fantasy. In these I wanted to tie everything together with a secondary storyline about a Spirit watching over it all. A real/yet supernatural persona tied to the culture. You are most likely right in that it will never be totally finished. Thank you. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."