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Dec 29, 2008
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The Immortal Perish
The spirited soul draws a deep breath
Much of what was has since died,
A remnant of a time past,
the decaying day
Yet still he remains.
The warm air kisses his face
the eternal scent of rain lingers in the air
promises un-kept to the scorched earth on which he’s perched.
Distant battles still echo in his ears
His watchful eyes staring longingly into the horizon’s abyss
His heart still beats,
his concealed battle-drum
His day will come,
the ground will shake,
his battle-cry will rip through the foundations of the earth…
… but until then…
… the fire, the fire rages with each breath.
— TheDarkOne, Dec 29, 2008
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TheDarkOne
17 years 4 months ago
Undying