Pushing Back

perseverance well portraid! Wonderful pacing, breathless in the first stanza, slowing down in stanza 2. Thanks for sharing, Ink

This is a fine piece. The last line spells defiance and grit. I I enjoyed it. Thanks ... Leonard

I love how you've structured the beginning and I especially like the last two lines. this poem is intense, like a punch in the face (this is only an assumption, I've never actually had the experience, but you get my meaning.) so many new pieces about strength and endurance have been posted lately, it's heart-warming to see all you fighters raise your voices out there. all my respect, your Proprietress

strong words for a strong fortitude. Nicely stated Chrys

Good piece, I like your style. Enjoyed the read Sincerely, Linda

Shoot, if big corporations are getting reach arounds, why can't us little pee-ons get one too?? Sorry... Nice secure, sturdy-footed write. Much luck in the new year. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If we always give what we have always given, we will always get what we have always got..." - Mike R.

You left it vague enough you can read all sorts of things into it, some of them naughty. *LOL* Great write sir. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett

What a great poem. Gives courage and hope, loved the determination. Best wishes, Wafi

Eyes popped and leaned closer to make sure I read what I thought I did. Fuckin' awesome write, this is a hard, hurt brave man talking. Much respect from another survivor, cheers, Jess

Yes, I thought it fun and naughty too. I guess you can tell where our minds are from reading these comments. Keep the entertainment coming. I, for one, love it. D.

Hey Moon, Loved this short piece,that packed a big punch! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

human's hope and confidence are nicely put with your genious. shanmugam