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The Magic From the Meadow

I had been walking for quite some time,
an exercise for the mind and soul,
just meandering down the path.

I was merely taking a walk.
I had no agenda, or destination in mind,
and I certainly wasn't searching for anything.

Then, I found myself standing in a meadow
with foliage and flowers, abundant.
So pleased, was I with my gaze.

Suddenly, my eyes rested on a beautiful flower
and I decided to take the plant home.
I was extremely careful as I uprooted her.

She was truly a flower, grand
with colors vibrant, and a scent that swayed the soul.
I believe that my senses have never been treated so kindly.

Carefully, I traveled with her to my home.
I even paused by a brook to moisten her soil
to refresh her roots, so that her petals would not wilt.

At home, I decided to replant her in the front yard
so that all could enjoy her beauty,
for this was truly the loveliest plant I had ever seen.

I took much pride in caring for her.
I soon became capable of discerning her needs,
and I earnestly met every one of them.

Then, the unthinkable happened
and she began to wither and die;
and gone, was the magic from the meadow.

I was not personally prepared
to lose the magic that this flower
had brought into my life.

Surely fate had better things to do
than to steal away the color from my soul.
So sad was I, that I weeped tears from my heart.

For the longest time, I considered not replacing her
for she was beautiful beyond compare,
and the meadow yielded not, a duplicate.

Then I realized, that my eyes had drank in her beauty
and that it would always be with me,
and I braved to walk to the meadow, once again.

Standing, once again in the vista of the meadow,
I noticed many other beautiful plants,
but, the the magic of the meadow sang out to me;

and I finally understood what defined the magic.
It is in the entirety of the meadow.
One is not allowed to remove just a fraction of the magic.

The magic of the meadow is for all to enjoy
and it is destroyed when disassembled,
and it certainly wasn't meant to be taken home.

I now walk the meandering pathway, regularly
and I always end up, gazing at the meadow,
and I always savor those walks, and cherish the view.
— docmaverick, Dec 28, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

Beauty

It is held there deep in your mind, it is as you said in your poem not a physical thing, it is not something you touch,it is something that touches you, there where you are, deep inside. This is true beauty, where you can have it, and leave it for others to see, as you will do. A lovely write and wish that others will see the reason for the not picking, but for the sharing. One day you will have your very own meadow and there you will once again see that flower as you hold it inside, it will bloom again. Yours, Ian.T
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 5 months ago

That's the magic...

....that I was speaking of! How astute for you to recognize my direction! I don't know if you realize this, but, yours are the comments worth reading. Thank-you, #{:>{)= doc.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

17 years 5 months ago

The magic from the Meadow

Doc: that you allowed me to transfer my thoughts this morning and walk in the meadow you write of, I thank you.....beautiful
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 5 months ago

The Magic

Doc Beautiful lesson, beautifully written~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

Our "meadow"...

....is what we make of it, and how we share. Thanks for your sweet comment, and keen insight. Standing in the "meadow of your words", #{:>{)}=/ doc.
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Arrow

16 years 11 months ago

Touching, romantic piece.

It took me a long time to learn that when I think: "Surely fate had better things to do than to steal away the color from my soul" I have played a significant role in this theft. Thanks for the reminder.