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Dec 28, 2008
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The Mussel Picker's Tale
if you have the precious time
take enough to read my rhyme
for if you do, then you will see
a place close-hearted in my memory.
a crescent beach of golden sand
slopes gently from an emerald land
to kiss a quiet sunlit sea
where soaring gulls cry plaintively.
on that lonely beach there stands
a ruined castle that commands
a slender strait of still water
dividing one land from another
Across that narrow gleam of sea
there lies an island thick with trees
where stillness broods and darkness weaves
a hush of watchful mystery.
when I was there one summer morn
picking mussels from blue ocean,
I looked up from my work to see
a young woman standing over me.
fiery hair and emerald eye
lissome form and lovely smile
she greeted me, and shyly asked
if she could have some of my catch.
she offered pay for what I had
I shrugged and said I would be glad
to let her have as many of
my mussels she could carry off.
she smiled thanks and with her skirt
she formed a pouch in which I put
a good large portion of my catch
from my overflowing canvas bag.
and when her skirts were brimming full
she coyly asked for just one more
I looked down in the bag for one:
when I looked up, I was alone.
then I fled in fear, having found
not a single footprint around
the sand where she and I had met
nor any hint she'd come and left.
but later when I pulled my catch
from beached row-boat I split the bag
and on the spill of mussels found
a single solid silver crown.
I've gone back many times since then
to pick mussels, each time remembering
to leave a portion of what I take
for a lovely unseen red-haired maiden,
just in case.
— Race_9togo, Dec 28, 2008
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Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Race, I loved the story
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
Rett...
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks Rett