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Dec 28, 2008
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the Great Beyond
the candy-coated air seems as invincible
as she feels
floating in the Great Beyond
“why great? and beyond what?”
you ask me, still too confused
“it is great for it has become
to be beyond human measure”
I tell you, still too wise
“the brilliant minds of eternity
have laughed in its face again and again,
it being misunderstood by so many,
the artificiality of our eyes
has only reflected its fragments”
the words linger in the air
illuminating like neon lights
seemingly displaced in the drowsy desert
the Great Beyond proudly takes a bow
and mischievously disappears
around the nearest corner
— Proprietress of Crimson Hearts, Dec 28, 2008
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
You´re so right
W.C.Wampler
17 years 5 months ago
Beyond poem
yenti
17 years 5 months ago
here
Stella
17 years 5 months ago
You’re such a ‘true’
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 5 months ago
an abstract poem will mean
deelilah
17 years 4 months ago
Another poem to ponder
Electric Blue
17 years 4 months ago
The Great Beyond
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
ooops!!!