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the Great Beyond

the candy-coated air seems as invincible
as she feels
floating in the Great Beyond

“why great? and beyond what?”
you ask me, still too confused
“it is great for it has become
to be beyond human measure”
I tell you, still too wise
“the brilliant minds of eternity
have laughed in its face again and again,
it being misunderstood by so many,
the artificiality of our eyes
has only reflected its fragments”

the words linger in the air
illuminating like neon lights
seemingly displaced in the drowsy desert

the Great Beyond proudly takes a bow
and mischievously disappears
around the nearest corner


— Proprietress of Crimson Hearts, Dec 28, 2008

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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

You´re so right

about the Great Beyond being elusive. We cannot pin it down, no matter how hard we try. Great to see you´re back, Ink
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 5 months ago

Beyond poem

Prop.,One thing about writing about incomprehesible things, is that it can lead to a confusing write. At the end, if you saw a 'proud' beyond take a bow, and "mischievously disappear around the nearest corner", it was just you who lost the glimpse. Still, the search for understanding is a right thing. wcw
yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

here

the great beyond went round the corner, there you could not see it. It will return and touch your soul, then with a gentle light you will become one with everything. Or something. Lovely to read, Yours Ian.T
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Stella

17 years 5 months ago

You’re such a ‘true’

You're such a 'true' poet Proprietress, I read the lines over and over again and find new meaning every time. I love the first three 'introductory' lines, they remind me of book I once read by a Dutch writer that also carried this elusive theme. Magical as always! ~Stella
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 5 months ago

an abstract poem will mean

an abstract poem will mean differently to different person and strikingly may not eb what the poet intended. Speaking true, i am not clear with the thought you concieved while writing this. as this seems a good one i want your explenation so that i can understand
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 4 months ago

Another poem to ponder

I, for one do like to ponder these things-- 'I tell you, still too wise “the brilliant minds of eternity have laughed in its face again and again, it being misunderstood by so many, the artificiality of our eyes has only reflected its fragments” And these lines are probably right on. Yours, Deelilah
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 4 months ago

The Great Beyond

Kata This is very thought provoking my freind. I seem to be in the place of beyond often. I am always searching. You set my mind racing looking for answers great write my friend I love the tangle weave you set. Electric blue.
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

ooops!!!

I am so sorry, I completely forgot about this poem so I didn't write anyone back, I apologize! thank you all for reading and commenting. respectfully, Kata